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Love In the Wind

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sinuous the paths leading to my garden a maze tangled to rambling thoughts trapped behind a wall reduced to puzzle pieces scattered in the wind my mind gone astray my love forgotten AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on July 4, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (5) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 2:41:00 AM

This poem moves; it is difficult to do this, and yet, here she is!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2020 12:00:00 AM

Elegant metaphor, Line. You have said so much in such concise wording - "tangled, rambling, trapped, sinuous,scattered." Wonderful choice of words in action. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2020 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment ~

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/6/2020 10:44:00 PM

A well laid out, terse verse, Line, my friend, and my compliments on your righteous endeavors, achieving an honorable placement, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2020 7:46:00 AM

Thanks, William. Much appreciated ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/6/2020 12:18:00 PM

Back with congrats on your placement in Brian's contest, Line! Smiles, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thanks again, Gershon. Most appreciated ~

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/6/2020 11:43:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Line:-) It looks like it was written for Constance's "Maze" contest. Loved it. Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2020 7:48:00 AM

Much appreciated, thanks.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/6/2020 10:20:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this. Your brain is like a garden Line? A maze of neurons. Confusion perhaps? Is life all rosey in the garden? I need to re-read. Gary :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2020 7:50:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Gary. Some poems are meant to be a question more than an answer ~

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/5/2020 11:08:00 AM

Into the open sky thoughts go....I like how you expressed your feelings here...

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/5/2020 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo. Much appreciated ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/4/2020 11:51:00 PM

Delicately and freshly imaged. Esp. like the way you separated the 2nd and 3rd lines. Great effect there. Kudos, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/5/2020 12:39:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 7/4/2020 8:54:00 AM

Oh sounds like the one that got away... I like the use of words for this poem..

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/4/2020 3:44:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, SO ~ that's one interpretation.