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Love In All the Wrong Places

Love you here Love you there Love you still But I'm appreciated no where Bring you happiness Bring you joy Give you my all But I'm null and void You have my heart You Have my mind You have my soul But it's still a waste of time I bring you peace But I stand alone I guess you missed it So I've moved along

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/14/2016 6:28:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Freddie. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/13/2016 9:33:00 AM

You have lots of repeating lines, nice going, Freddie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Freddie Morrison
Date: 5/13/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thank you. I have wrote in a long time so it was a little rush job and quick but I have the best yet to come

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/13/2016 8:16:00 AM

Freddie, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 12:45:00 AM

Freddie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@