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Love In a Beauty Fair - a 'Kawaali'

Love in a Beauty Fair My Poem in the format of a Kawaali – in English Male Singer 01 / Group of singers I hear that we are in a fair, of Husno-Adda* and beauty, Still, I am, in search of a heart, full of Love, Female Singer 01 / Group of singers: This is a gathering of Beauty and graceful ones, not a crowd of lovers, The one who is ready, to sacrifice everything, may possess the beauty. Male Singer 02 / Group of singers: Take a test of our Love my dear, or come close to test my love, Still if your beauty is not satisfied, just try the love at-least for ones, Female Singer 02 / Group of singers: O what you are crying as Love & Love me, is not that simple my dear, There are lovers who sacrifice even their life, still they do not get love, Male Singer 03/ Group of singers: You are narrating a story, because you have not, yet seen love, When your Beauty would relish love, you would be searching love everywhere. Female Singer 03 / Group of singers: This is what you say my dear, it is only first time that we have met here, Let me see your splendors of love, or it is just a way of yours, to mold me, Male Singer 04 / Group of singers: After witnessing the splendors of love, you may find you cannot live without it, anymore, Feeling the extreme agonies, you may repent, but then you won’t find the love anywhere, Female Singer 04 / Group of singers: O, if it is like that, let me the see, the splendors of your Love, You say that I shall be dying on that love, O, let me die to witness, what you say, Male Singer 05 / Group of singers: We are wasting these precious moments of love, talking about living or dying, Let us live these lovely moments in love, instead of talking to live or die. Female Singer 05 / Group of singers: O, I can sacrifice even my life, on this molding art of yours, my love, Perhaps beauty is hidden in love but Love is nothing without beauty. Together they sing 06 /Group of singers: It is not a thing of dying or living, nor a fight between beauty and love, It is only, the art of living and loving, which creates only cheerfulness. Ravindra Kanpur India 22nd Oct 2010 Clarifications * Husno-Adda. The graceful art of showing the beauty of women.

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Date: 10/24/2010 11:38:00 AM
In it own unique way Ravindra, the beauty of the female form in it's entirty is the feminine manifestation of the essence of love's self! As is your free verse expression. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/24/2010 11:25:00 AM
thank you so much for your inspiring comments-- I appreciate each one of them-- enjoy your day and keep writing Ravindra :) sorry again for the confusion :)
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Date: 10/24/2010 11:24:00 AM
Hi Ravindra :) I really admire how you enlighten us with the beauty of this poetic form of India and it sure is very interesting to read-- I enjoyed reading the replies from the male & females-- definitely adds another layer to the poem and I agree it probably is even better when sung-- :) thank you for sharing this with us-- btw pls forgive my silliness-- I'm actually nikko palmario-- & you've passed by and left wonderful comments on my poetry before :) --I was just being silly this october
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:37:00 PM
What Carolyn says is so true. This is from your culture, RAvindra, and I don't know what we amerians reading it could do to improve on it. It's unique to YOU and I bet it is enchanting to hear it sung. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/23/2010 7:02:00 AM
Please add your wisdom to the discussion on my blog today regarding Qi or Prana! Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2010 6:46:00 AM
Very, very beautiful form and the message about love is demonstrated with incredible style, Ravindra. Don't change any of it. It's perfect and it goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:24:00 PM
many beautiful lines within this poem, don't change a thing, just let the beauty of the words sing~~
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Date: 10/22/2010 8:02:00 AM
This is so lovely, that changing it would be a shame, Ravindra...so please do leave it as the beauty it is. This new form is so facinating, and would be lovely to hear it sung. You are an artist with words! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/22/2010 7:48:00 AM
Exquisite! This is really a piece of art. Though there are some minor spelling mistakes but marvellous write Ravindra!
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:32:00 AM
very many challenges coming from each side and that is the soul of Kawaali, Ravindra. I can visualize how would it be rendered in Hindi with hilarious responses from the audience.
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:17:00 AM
Ravindra I would not change one word..this is simply beautiful and elegant as written and its very clear and expressive as well.. my friend.. the love emits from the lines themselves ... and the connection is very evident luv.. once a poem is written by the author .. it should stand on its own merit as this one exceeds that ... therefore my opinion.. leave as it was originally penned... thankxxx for the enjoyment of this creative piece today with luv..
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:14:00 AM
Soup Mail ..my friend with luv..
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Date: 10/21/2010 10:30:00 PM
I welcome if some of my Poetry Soup friends would like to make some changes to make it in perfect singing form. Ravindra
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