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Dusk fell heavily and the sky lit up With a myriad of luminous stars Each glistening like mini buttercup, Shining even beyond Saturn and Mars. We put our warm heads against each other. View falling stars, visit constellations. Isn't the immense universe a wonder? Men should find peace in communications.

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Date: 7/30/2021 3:35:00 PM
The immense universe is a wonder, the moon and stars, planets so far, it’s ineffable. I wonder if there’s peace in the universe. A lovely poem Victor… Belle
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery with a touch of warmth .. Why can men not find peace?
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:38:00 PM
You hit the jackpot with this wonderful masterpiece Victor, you captured a precious views of the stars and the bright planets along with a great love sensory. I enjoyed reading this poem and it’s into my fave. Blessings and best wishes
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Date: 7/26/2021 4:56:00 PM
This is really nice, Victor. Flows well.
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Date: 7/26/2021 2:28:00 PM
WoW! Victor, I enjoyed viewing this lovely and breathtaking write. You captured gazing at the stars very well. Excellent job. PS, I read your soup mail message; however, I’m not able to send a response. ( my send button doesn’t work) Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 2:17:00 PM
This is so lovely Victor, love the imagery.
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Date: 7/26/2021 11:42:00 AM
a joy to read Victor i especially love the first stanza and the mini buttercup description:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2021 10:00:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Victor ... I always admire the stars ... the pearls in the sky - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:38:00 AM
Wow a lovely stellar romantic gazing together at the stars, a brill poem indeed!! Kudos for the wonder. Plz also do read and comment my newest poem
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Date: 7/26/2021 6:31:00 AM
Sweet! Love the third line, Victor! ~ hugs
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Date: 7/26/2021 3:53:00 AM
Loved the metaphor of buttercup and great imagery throughout... beautifully done...
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Date: 7/26/2021 1:40:00 AM
A journey through the universe is not impossible when seeing the wonder of a night sky filled with stars...Delice
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Date: 7/25/2021 10:29:00 PM
Lovely poem, Victor, the stars remind me of the Almighty God:)
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Date: 7/25/2021 10:43:00 AM
What a lovely nightfall and evening you describe, Victor. I love the way the stars glistened like mini buttercups. No wonder romance was in the air. :)
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:55:00 AM
men should find peace in communicating with the stars and the heavens, they are great company, Lovely poetic thoughts dear Victor, have a blessed Sunday :)
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:14:00 AM
A very romantic scene Victor made even better with the view of the heavens. Tom
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Date: 7/25/2021 8:38:00 AM
Your poetic words as luminous as the stars they describe, Victor. Much enjoyed the journey through constellations.
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