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Love Faded Away

Our love has faded away, like a ripple in the water, that causes our boat of life to sway. Once it grew stronger than we ever thought it would, like a falling start, it just got smaller. So now here we stand in a hazy cloud surrounded by memories of pain and heartache. Walking away from what we once cherished with loving hearts so tender and mild. wrote 8-11-08

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Angelia Dawson

Date: 8/20/2008 12:51:00 PM

a ever heart felt poem and lot of insight on what can be lost

John Boak

Date: 8/14/2008 1:04:00 AM

this is very real james...a lot of people will be able to relate to it...the sweet way it was worded adds to the touch of sadness that emanates from this poem...great work!-john e

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/12/2008 5:27:00 AM

Sad and beautiful and often so true for many. So sorry for your heartache. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/12/2008 5:10:00 AM

Oh, so sad...love is...well...lve just is what it is. Very beautiful, love Kristin

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/12/2008 1:20:00 AM

James - Your heart sure does show its self in this poem James - What a wonderful outlook that simply shows how bright the light inside your heart burns - God Bless James

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/11/2008 10:48:00 PM

tenderness of the heart written in these lines with flowing emotional sadness but well written,,,blessings cecil, and Thank You for taking the time to read and leave your comment

Christy Hardy

Date: 8/11/2008 6:55:00 PM

Sometimes we can't hang on to the things we love, sad but true, relationships are not certain....love this, Always, Christy

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/11/2008 4:51:00 PM

This is so painful to read, it happens so often unfortunately. That starry eyed beginning that we began with, quite often becomes so difficult to hang onto.