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Love Eternal

Our love will e'er be Like this never ending ring For eternity Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 3 Linda's "Voicing Vows" Contest - August 2010

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Date: 8/28/2010 8:24:00 AM
thank you Bob H. you made my day by responding with me not to worry. My mind was just wondering ""NOW WHERE IS THIS BOB, THE MAN WHO MAKES POETRY LOOK SO EASY"" well I am glad you are doing really good. I alos love your Senryu rings and eternity go together well,..p.d.
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:46:00 PM
Nicely done, making it with the ring. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:51:00 AM
Great Senryu my friend.. congrats!!! Michael
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Date: 8/21/2010 11:48:00 AM
Very nice senryu Bob, congrats on your success. Thanks for your comments on 'A Raven's Thirst'. Dog sitting duties are over, thank heavens. The little sweetheart recovered in time for their return, such timing!! ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:24:00 AM
Mine has about lost it's design which were the moon and the stars all around it. But it still is on my finger and always will be. Very Beautiful poem, Bob. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert on your #3 sin, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/20/2010 2:04:00 PM
Congrats, Sarge. Excellent. Ralph
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Date: 8/20/2010 10:16:00 AM
This one would have been tops for me. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert in Linda-Marie's contest "Voicing Vows". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:15:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your success in my Voicing Vows contest with these lovely words... appreciate your support of my contests.. ciao with luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:13:00 AM
Bob, I really enjoy the way you compared the marriage to the "never ending ring." Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/20/2010 6:02:00 AM
Bob, I reckon you have a winner here.. but thats just my opinion.. All the best for the contest ;) Wilma Thank you for always commenting on mine as well :)
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