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I am a blank page, I need some color, On this dull paper, To awaken me, So folk can read me, Use a bright red, Use yellow too, Use a dark blue, A hint of green, Look at me, What am I? Do you see, My heart And deep Love? 1-17-19 Contest :Any Theme Diminished, Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messenia

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Bobby May

Date: 2/8/2019 11:44:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations on your WIN, wonderful write my friend!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/28/2019 8:35:00 AM

How descriptive Alexis may you continue to co,our soup with your wonderful words:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/27/2019 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Alexis, well done!

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/27/2019 3:30:00 PM

You know I’ve loved your poem from the beginning, Alexis! Congrats on your win! It’s first place in my book!! :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/27/2019 3:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Laura. I appreciate you telling about the typos as well. Once again thanks, I share this win with you:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:14:00 PM

this is sweet and colorful! I am really enjoying this winner list! Congrats for being on it, Alexis, with this gem.

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2019 12:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win Alexis!..

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 9:06:00 AM

You have colored a wonderful poem of love here, Alexis. Love it! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Charlie :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/27/2019 9:35:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Thank you so much. You received alot of good entries for your contest. I really appreciate my placement:-) Alexis

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/20/2019 9:26:00 PM

beautiful hexaverse poem on love theme // I enjoyed

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2019 11:27:00 AM

wonderful burst of hues... i enjoyed this lovely piece, alexis...huggs

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/20/2019 1:28:00 AM

Hi Nette, I always enjoy your awesome comments and visits:-) Alexis

Bobby May

Date: 1/18/2019 9:57:00 AM

I believe those colors make black, I could be wrong I was wrong once, lol GREAT poem my friend! That's amazing my friend black ink on a blank page showing your love through your words a FAV

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/18/2019 11:43:00 AM

Hi Bobby, Thanks for the awesome comment and for faving my poem. I really appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2019 9:04:00 AM

Hi Alexis, colours - I love colours, I have a poetry corner which has every colour imaginable placed somewhere within it. Really enjoyed your poem and the medley of colours you mixed in it! Well penned! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/20/2019 1:27:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I love colors! I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 1/18/2019 8:00:00 AM

Beautiful poem Alexis..

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/20/2019 1:25:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Thank you very much. Thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2019 1:48:00 AM

Never heard of this form, you've written it well Alexis. Good luck. Tom.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/20/2019 1:23:00 AM

Hi Tom, I just found out about it too! I appreciate your awesome comment and continued support:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/17/2019 11:30:00 PM

I often feel like a blank page that will always remain so, nice poem!

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/20/2019 1:21:00 AM

I couldn't imagine you feeling like a blank page. I'm so happy that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2019 9:49:00 PM

Lovely diminished hexaverse, Alexis, one of my favorite topics: colors! I added it to my FAV list.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/17/2019 10:30:00 PM

Hi Caren, Colors brighten up our dull word.I appreciate that you stopped by:-)Alexis

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/17/2019 9:35:00 PM

Very creative, Alexis! Check line 4..has 6 syllables instead of 5. Otherwise, fantastic hexaverse! GL in the contest! :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/17/2019 9:46:00 PM

Hi Laura, Thank you very much. I fixed line 4. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis