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Why It's Important to Attract Bees to Your Garden

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ white blossoms open the hungry bees are caressed in soft, love chambers

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Date: 4/3/2024 4:09:00 AM
Amazing how the cohabitation of flowers and bees work out for so many things in nature and also mankind. Thanks for sharing this idea with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:14:00 AM
I agree, Sara K. Cohabitation seems like a tiny miracle to me. Appreciate your visit! Have a pleasant day, Sara B
Date: 4/3/2024 1:28:00 AM
Such great imagery was inspired by a few lines. You did well.
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Date: 4/3/2024 4:15:00 AM
thank you, Victor, for your kind words and feedback. Wishing you a blessed day, Sara
Date: 4/2/2024 8:24:00 PM
I love the picture, stunning, Sara. Wonderful narration of the bee opening up to Spring! Thanks for sharing ~Anaya
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:15:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Anaya. Grateful for your kind and positive words. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/2/2024 8:22:00 PM
This haiju speaks volumes! Exactly what a Haiku should do! Thank you for the beauty. Pangie xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:16:00 AM
awww, thank you, Pangie, for your enthusiastic comments. Always grateful for your visits. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/2/2024 7:03:00 PM
A wonderful haiku, my friend. They say the bee population is dwindling at an alarming rate.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:17:00 AM
Seems like I read something about the declining bee population. That is alarming...can't be good for flowers and beekeepers. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 4/2/2024 7:03:00 PM
Your haiku beautifully captures the profound connection between white blossoms and bees, showcasing the delicate and affectionate bond they share, dear Sara. The simplicity and evocative language used in the poem create a gentle and soothing atmosphere, while the imagery of the bees being caressed in tender, affectionate spaces further emphasizes the intimacy and tenderness portrayed.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:18:00 AM
Your comments are always insightful and provide feedback in a soft manner. Color me grateful for you, your visits, and your uplifting words. Have a splendid day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

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