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Poetry/verse/love can be a dagger
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1580-256-21
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 21, 2023
For the International Contest, Mocking The Dead
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 09/29/2023

First Place

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once your touch would make me tremble your lips on mine an ecstasy dance I gave you my heart until you hurt me so I turned away from you and your cruelty now, news of your death shakes the ocean of my sleep and I recall the sweetness among the dregs of our love I am weeping, broken, and seek revenge so, I am making a journey to your grave in a sea of headstones my heart is drowned in memory I find you and I am filled with scorn and hate for years I have waited for this moment to mock you to speak unkind words ... I want to scream but I kneel- someone has left a beautiful bouquet blooming well, so what pathetic man that someone loved you you were a coldhearted cruel man unworthy of any woman's love I close my eyes and see your handsome face those devouring eyes then, I see your evil smile you only wanted to possess, not love to conquer, then, throw away, to leave your lover shattered oh, how I have wanted to seek some kind of revenge your were a horrible, evil man, I am sure Heaven locked the gate you have destroyed too many women with your fake promises I am weeping as the birds chirp and chatter and the wind whispers and leaves rustle waves of grief crash over me like great ocean waves oh, you brutal man deep inside me I still loved you I stand, touch your name and turn away for mocking the dead does not bring peace to the heart . . .

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Date: 9/30/2023 10:58:00 PM
Great deepfelt poem with great imagery and feelings. Congratulations on your win in Silent One contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2023 11:49:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, appreciate.
Date: 9/29/2023 12:53:00 PM
oh, you brutal man deep inside me I still loved you I stand, touch your name and turn away for mocking the dead does not bring peace to the heart…such depth of emotion! Congratulations, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 10:11:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, appreciate.
Date: 9/29/2023 11:21:00 AM
You always write with so much emotions and depth.. once again it is evident here.. Thank you for writing for my poem and congratulations on your placement..
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Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 10:12:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest, the compliment on my poem and writing and for the congratulations, appreciate.
Date: 9/21/2023 3:49:00 PM
Hello Constance, It is best to forgedt a person like that. in time you will heal. Love & Friendship /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2023 4:03:00 PM
Hello Constance, You are welcome. Love & Friendship /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2023 12:02:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for the comment, of course, you are right.

Book: Shattered Sighs