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In a modern world do you expect The lights to fail and plunge us all Into an abyss of darkness? So I light a candle, like days of yore, Pick up pen and paper; feel as if I'm walking In a heavy dank mist like a half blind man Searching, Searching Hoping. So in semi darkness, I sit alone. Dare I write about you? Imagine your twinkling eyes, Or should I close my eyes And sense your smell Of perfume, a mixture of Lavender and thyme? Darkness makes me restless. I move cautiously around the room. I peer out into the night, Through a window pane glazed with dew. An inky darkness greets me. But lo, up there, is it not a strange star Falling within the night? I gaze at the solemn beauty That brings back the simple joys, Just as the strains of an old song Echo within the corridors of my mind I silently pray and wish That you are here with me, That I may feel your velvet skin, Taste your luscious lips. I'll lay you slowly on my couch Kiss your shoulders bare, Experience in that starry night The pangs of angelic peace. Then I'll try to understand What you really find in me! For I mull and think: Do I deserve your love? Alas the lights are still out. And I am in the dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 7/29/2022 1:50:00 PM
To love deeply allows one to write apoem as passionate and yet questioning as this one. We may not ever deserve the love we receive from others, but if we love others we do deserve to share love with them. Two shall become one in Love. Bless you and thank you for share with us through you gifted poetry, Victor. I'm following your poetry my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/27/2022 3:44:00 AM
Nicely done Victor, Haunting with romantic feelings...Delice
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Date: 7/24/2022 3:03:00 AM
Victor love how you incorporated a falling star and magically turned it into a sent love from up above. Your creative mind reaches the heavens with this unique Poetry of love. god bless you my friend and hope you are doing well...
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Date: 7/23/2022 6:01:00 PM
Wonderful! A write from your heart in the dark Victor. When you see a falling star it’s your loved one sending love from afar… Belle
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Date: 7/22/2022 10:02:00 AM
Victor, how you loved her and oh yes, you know she knew that you were worthy of her love, and how tantamount in her life you were - you only have to look up at night in the dark and see ONE shining bright star as she smiles down upon you. GREAT POEM GREAT POET! HUGS BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Date: 7/21/2022 3:36:00 PM
Victor, a wonderfully penned poem full of both sadness and romance.
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Date: 7/21/2022 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful Victor. You always amaze me with the depth of your poems! Linda
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Date: 7/21/2022 10:49:00 AM
Very wistful and solemn and beautiful. A captivating write! :)
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:32:00 PM
wow, such pensive writing this is. Love it, Victor. Sorry to not have read your poetry lately. Trying like crazy to catch up on commenting!
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:20:00 PM
So beautifully written dear Bard of love ! The semi darkness, the deep longing and the imaginary presence of your loved one make this poem one of real beauty!
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:43:00 PM
Wow! An amazing write! Another level!
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Date: 7/20/2022 2:20:00 PM
Oh Victor….another captivating poem by the King of Romance! Loved it…..Debx
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Date: 7/20/2022 1:01:00 PM
A very sweet longing, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/20/2022 12:49:00 PM
The darkness is suffocating at times and we look forward to the light to lift us out of the gloom. Tom
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:55:00 AM
Victor's amorous moments are exquisite. Your wonderful atmosphere is ideal for a romantic evening with a specific woman. Your stunning vistas, which I like so much, exemplify both a wonderful setting and diction.
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:39:00 AM
Victor, I am touched by the darkness of the poem, and the sense of longing. Good going.
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Date: 7/20/2022 7:15:00 AM
Hi Victor, this is such a wonderful write that touches the heart with tender feelings. You paint such wonderful visions within the mind, of one alone, thinking of the love. An inspiration for one who adores the lure of love. Excellent, my friend ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/20/2022 6:21:00 AM
Much enjoyed how you paint a solitary scene, ruminating with the beloved. Highly romantic moments--apt for an evening of missing a special someone. Excellent as always.
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Date: 7/20/2022 2:32:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic. If she is with you, she thinks you are her match for life. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/20/2022 1:27:00 AM
I adore this romantic poem Victor. I smiled at your ending as it can be taken in a few different ways you leave up to the reader. Just lovely images that inspire romance my friend. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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