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Love By Candlelight

In a modern world do you expect
The lights to fail and plunge us all
Into an abyss of darkness?
So I light a candle, like days of yore,
Pick up pen and paper; feel as if I'm walking
In a heavy dank mist like a half blind man
Searching, 
Searching
Hoping.
 
So in semi darkness, I sit alone.
Dare I write about you?
Imagine your twinkling eyes,
Or should I close my eyes
And sense your smell
Of perfume, a mixture of
Lavender and thyme?
 
Darkness makes me restless.
I move cautiously around the room.
I peer out into the night,
Through a window pane glazed with dew.
An inky darkness greets me.
But lo, up there, is it not a strange star 
Falling within the night?
I gaze at the solemn beauty
That brings back the simple joys,
Just as the strains of an old song
Echo within the corridors of my mind
I silently pray and wish
That you are here with me,
That I may feel your velvet skin,
Taste your luscious lips.
I'll lay you slowly on my couch
Kiss your shoulders bare,
Experience in that starry night
The pangs of angelic peace.
Then I'll try to understand
What you really find in me!
For I mull and think:
Do I deserve your love?
Alas the lights are still out.
And I am in the dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 1:50 PM
To love deeply allows one to write apoem as passionate and yet questioning as this one. We may not ever deserve the love we receive from others, but if we love others we do deserve to share love with them. Two shall become one in Love. Bless you and thank you for share with us through you gifted poetry, Victor. I'm following your poetry my friend. Bill
Skelly Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Nicely done Victor, Haunting with romantic feelings...Delice
Tor Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 3:03 AM
Victor love how you incorporated a falling star and magically turned it into a sent love from up above. Your creative mind reaches the heavens with this unique Poetry of love. god bless you my friend and hope you are doing well...
Edmonds  Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Wonderful! A write from your heart in the dark Victor. When you see a falling star it’s your loved one sending love from afar… Belle
Proxenos Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Victor, how you loved her and oh yes, you know she knew that you were worthy of her love, and how tantamount in her life you were - you only have to look up at night in the dark and see ONE shining bright star as she smiles down upon you. GREAT POEM GREAT POET! HUGS BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
Kitchin Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Victor, a wonderfully penned poem full of both sadness and romance.
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Beautiful Victor. You always amaze me with the depth of your poems! Linda
Buehler Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Very wistful and solemn and beautiful. A captivating write! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:32 PM
wow, such pensive writing this is. Love it, Victor. Sorry to not have read your poetry lately. Trying like crazy to catch up on commenting!
George Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:20 PM
So beautifully written dear Bard of love ! The semi darkness, the deep longing and the imaginary presence of your loved one make this poem one of real beauty!
Seeker Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Wow! An amazing write! Another level!
M  Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Oh Victor….another captivating poem by the King of Romance! Loved it…..Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:01 PM
A very sweet longing, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim
Cunningham Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 12:49 PM
The darkness is suffocating at times and we look forward to the light to lift us out of the gloom. Tom
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Victor's amorous moments are exquisite. Your wonderful atmosphere is ideal for a romantic evening with a specific woman. Your stunning vistas, which I like so much, exemplify both a wonderful setting and diction.
Bayles Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Victor, I am touched by the darkness of the poem, and the sense of longing. Good going.
Raven Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Hi Victor, this is such a wonderful write that touches the heart with tender feelings. You paint such wonderful visions within the mind, of one alone, thinking of the love. An inspiration for one who adores the lure of love. Excellent, my friend ..... Mike.
Pandit Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Much enjoyed how you paint a solitary scene, ruminating with the beloved. Highly romantic moments--apt for an evening of missing a special someone. Excellent as always.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:32 AM
Ahh!! Romantic. If she is with you, she thinks you are her match for life. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:27 AM
I adore this romantic poem Victor. I smiled at your ending as it can be taken in a few different ways you leave up to the reader. Just lovely images that inspire romance my friend. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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