Love Awaits

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Near my garden gates hunger and thirst we will sate there my love awaits

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White Sage

Date: 2/12/2016 8:56:00 AM

lucky me, if you're gonna sate hunger and thirst, then i should be a guest, am welcomed right? and don't mind the fact that i can eat the whole everest lol...you shouldn't let your love await anymore, open the gate before he becomes planted...excellent senryu, well expressed

Lin Lane
Date: 2/12/2016 8:59:00 AM

lol Sorry, you'll have to feast elsewhere. This is a private party! Thanks for continuing to read me, Sage.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2016 4:03:00 PM

Lin, I left you a note where you asked me about Jenny. HOpe you will see it. Now about this poem. I really like it and how you made it triple rhyme!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/11/2016 4:19:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for the nice comment. Now I have to remember where I asked you about her. lol I'll find it.