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Love At First Sight

The day that I fell in love Was the day when we first met I knew that she was the one When my heart beat fast

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Date: 10/24/2023 12:59:00 PM
Aww this one is so sweet dude... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, brother :) Much appreciated!
Date: 10/24/2023 6:08:00 AM
Sweet! Congratulations!
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 10/24/2023 4:00:00 AM
How cute! This is so romantic. I dont personally believe in love at first sight but sometimes when we meet the right one we just feel it dont we! Awwn!thats my reaction to this, just adorable! And soul warming! Thank you for writing , always! Congratulations on winning
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Ink. I think I only wrote 1 dodoitsu before, and that was a long time ago. Yeah, it's more like lust at first sight for me too! (lol) Hugs Charlie
Date: 10/22/2023 9:39:00 AM
Arr Charlie this is so delightfully romantic. So blessed are those that encounter ‘love at first sight’. A few lines that wonderfully express so much. Really enjoyed it. Hugs and smiles to you :):)
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Date: 10/20/2023 8:30:00 AM
Quite romantic. Blessings.
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Date: 10/19/2023 2:11:00 PM
a lovely romance Dodoitsu...love at first sight is just the best. Nicely done. have an enjoyable evening, Sara
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:43:00 AM
A lovey Dodoitsu write. Great memories are the best kind to have. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 10/19/2023 7:35:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing your work.
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Date: 10/19/2023 5:59:00 AM
- So sweeee..t, Charlie :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/19/2023 5:36:00 AM
Memories that remain forever. Splendid write, Charlie.
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