Love At First Sight

The day that I fell in love Was the day when we first met I knew that she was the one When my heart beat fast

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Silent One

Date: 10/24/2023 12:59:00 PM

Aww this one is so sweet dude... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, brother :) Much appreciated!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:08:00 AM

Sweet! Congratulations!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Kim :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 4:00:00 AM

How cute! This is so romantic. I dont personally believe in love at first sight but sometimes when we meet the right one we just feel it dont we! Awwn!thats my reaction to this, just adorable! And soul warming! Thank you for writing , always! Congratulations on winning

Charles Messina
Date: 10/26/2023 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement, Ink. I think I only wrote 1 dodoitsu before, and that was a long time ago. Yeah, it's more like lust at first sight for me too! (lol) Hugs Charlie

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/22/2023 9:39:00 AM

Arr Charlie this is so delightfully romantic. So blessed are those that encounter ‘love at first sight’. A few lines that wonderfully express so much. Really enjoyed it. Hugs and smiles to you :):)