Love At First Sight

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) neurotransmitting bioelectricity anticipation posted in March, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2018 6:25:00 PM

LOVE it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 7:05:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Pat Adams

Date: 3/12/2018 4:06:00 PM

Tom already said what I was going to. Wow only three words!! Impressive!.......Seems there's a Haiku frenzy going on!....great write!.....pat

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 5:15:00 PM

Thanks, Pat. Always great to get a visit and comment from you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2018 9:56:00 AM

Way over my head, yet, I still think it's wonderful, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 10:43:00 AM

LOL - transmitting neurons, biological electricity... some kind of interaction... anticipation... of course the title puts things in context. LOL Line xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2018 9:50:00 AM

Amazing , a three word hakiu, brillianty done Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 10:41:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated visit and comment.