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Love- a Word of Consistency

In the beginning God’s word potential, Was a word extremely essential, In the eventual, Formation, of the information, Needed in creation, And the substance of man, In God’s plan, Love’s consciousness force, Has long since divorced, By Old Testament's interjection, The goat of carnal invention, The source of all contention. The pie in the sky, Of carnal lie. Man’s elation, Into inflation, Words and phrases, poems and rhymes, Reflections of the times, Arrest and contest, reflections , Needing inspections, Complex googolplex, The world is surely hexed, All apart, from the heart, Wherein is hyper-synchronicity, Set on automatic consistency, Of utter simplicity, And the mutuality, Of love’s vortex vitality, Of all this is a reality, Not of mind’s technicality, Of invention, The contention, Of the complexity, Of the lie, About the pie, In the sky, In the beginning was the word, The word was with God, And the word was God! 8-22-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 6/17/2017 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful...
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Date: 6/17/2017 5:23:00 AM
I do wonder how we would live not believing in God in this today's world...Congrats for your poem ben featured! :)
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Date: 12/31/2009 4:36:00 PM
Wow! Another of your powerful writes here Moses! Powerful message of truth...God's TRUTH! Very uplifting to read and a great reminder to all...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works. Also many thanks too for your always kind comments and wonderful encouragement. All is deeply appreciated! Have a blessed evening~Mary
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Date: 11/16/2009 2:18:00 PM
OMG how glorious a poem is this one.. so emphatic ... so introspective... so Moses... just luv it ..my favs 2 nite.. truly creative from the Creator to your pen... awesome.. luv and thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry today... luv again... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/26/2009 8:44:00 PM
Dear John Moses, Your Spirituality and Poetic ability combine to grip the reader to read and read again Your linquistic Talent is a boon also I read in Awe Majestic POEM ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:06:00 AM
wow. . . . . . that made me head hurt >.^ . . . . . its good, but i hope you have some simpiler poems. . . again nice work xo Raiin
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Date: 10/2/2009 2:41:00 PM
great write so perfect and well said.........kate
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Date: 9/29/2009 8:34:00 PM
Quite an interesting poetic rendition about love. And the Word has been given for one purpose only, that we may become the image of God as He originally planned, the image of True Love. For God's love is true, unchanging and unconditionaly the essence of all life and things. Thanks for a thought provoking poem. God bless. Caroline.
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:36:00 PM
Ooooh... You Pulled Out The Big Guns for this One, Moses (or Should I Say, Pulled From The Depth of The Sea) (smile) Fantastic Poem, Honest, from Your Heart - A Man's Spiritual-Beautiful-Heart... (I could tell from the Title... It was going to be a good read... MoonBee
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:09:00 AM
Awesome!!! This is a superb poem. Keep up the great writing.
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Date: 9/9/2009 10:22:00 PM
Oh my, You have found all of the needed words, Impressive. Thank you for your Commentss. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:31:00 PM
Great insight in this write, Moses! Amazing rhyme, too. What a style you have! Been missing you as I am moving. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2009 1:37:00 AM
really Good, i enjoyed that nicely written. In the begining was the word ( Jesus) and the word is still in the world, and is still relevant in every way. thanks for commenting and have a good day.
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Date: 8/30/2009 10:43:00 AM
Terrific write and rhyme John, splendidly written>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 9:53:00 PM
I am not surprised one bit with the word-play and the ever extensive rhyme. Keep them coming, I may have competition yet...LOL.... Shallow? Yes, a tad bit, I know... Sometimes sir, it is a curse.. But, this curse plays a significant role in my writing, and my role on this earth... Everyone is a bit shallow, I am just a little more than the average......LOL....Thank you for all your kind words Moses.......:JP}{PJ:
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Date: 8/24/2009 11:25:00 AM
it's a great poem John and has a fun rhyme scheme like a lot of your work. other than that I realy can't comment on the subject matter. I understand exactly what you mean but I'm feeling the exact opposite on a regular basis, and never with any measure of consistency can I say I feel loved and loving towards all of God's creation. That's just too tall an order for me to fill right now...bless you Moses -Yoni
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:36:00 AM
A word of deeds,as your poetry verse John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 8/23/2009 8:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning John. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2009 1:15:00 PM
Pie in the sky by and by or some other pie. Nicely written. I like the first two lines especially. Keep writing. Sara
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