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Love went to the liquor store
She bought a bottle
Drank until the bottle was dry
Walked on over to the hardware store
Where there she bought a hunting knife


Love sliced open my chest
Her hands grasped my heart
She had a hearty meal
Dropping her knife
She walked away in the dark

Love stole my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/29/2015 4:41:00 PM
Ohhh, yes, the dark side of love. Just had to check out this one, and glad I did,
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arthur vaso
Date: 5/29/2015 8:54:00 PM
You look different without the knife and with sunglasses!!!! ( kidding )
Date: 2/24/2015 6:39:00 PM
Ummm... That's just scary! Lol. Very graphic!
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:32:00 PM
LOL thankfully pure fiction!
Date: 2/22/2015 10:15:00 PM
aww bloody love what a vicious sexy thing, :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 10:22:00 PM
Mind if I hide out at your place for a bit?
Date: 2/21/2015 1:24:00 PM
I remember love..with both its glory and pain.Says so much Arthur..So deep.A fav!
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:48:00 PM
You are so kind Charmaine, well I do say that to any woman who is not chasing me with a knife!!!! LOL
Date: 2/20/2015 10:48:00 AM
Read many poems on love stealing the heart,,this has to be one of the best....
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:46:00 PM
That's very kind of you Harry, nothing is nicer than a compliment from someone who is also a very fine poet!
Date: 2/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
She should be easy to find .... Love your dark haunts ....Bev
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Date: 2/22/2015 10:01:00 PM
Shhhhh ! She'll hear
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:44:00 PM
Thanks Bev, she is, me I am in hiding!!!!!!
Date: 2/20/2015 6:58:00 AM
OH LA LA LA!!! So she's the culprit and the reason you walk around....heartless! ;) Hugs
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/22/2015 9:43:00 PM
:) Thanks Eileen, and I use a lot of poetic license!!! I still have a wee heart, hidden somewhere
Date: 2/20/2015 5:34:00 AM
dark splendid write, arthur!
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 2/20/2015 3:50:00 AM
I see several interpretations in this write Arthur - a fascinating read my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Jan, if you read below, you are bang on, as I wrote this to have meaning on more than one level. I am happy that people got this!
Date: 2/20/2015 2:08:00 AM
Fabulous write my friend....I remember her
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:37:00 PM
Sure thats her Post Office Photo!!
Date: 2/20/2015 1:28:00 AM
Arthur, just read love, and it really touched me, as I am in recovery from alcohol for 30 years. The poem reached me at, perhaps, a different level than what you intended. I drank enough years to have a lot of my heart cut away, but have 30 years sober now. A great gathering of words. Thanks, Brian
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:37:00 PM
Well thank you Brian, and yes you are closer to the mark than you think, I wrote this to have more than one meaning!!! I am pleased it worked!