Love

I love you you first loved me, you are my everything you are so very great to me all your blessings are always over me, I want to say to you thank you today God Date Written: 6/22/2021 1 Place A Brian Strand July 8 Contest Judged:7/8/2021 Sponsored by: Brian Strand Note: 9 lines and rigid syllable count of 1, 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 2, 1

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/9/2021 11:35:00 AM

Heartwarming and beautifully written. Congratulations on your win, with this fine verse.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/10/2021 12:25:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Love write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................

Greg Gaul

Date: 7/9/2021 6:41:00 AM

Your faith rings true in your poetry. Namaste.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one on Love. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/8/2021 11:59:00 PM

Beautiful Creations. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/9/2021 7:52:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/3/2021 10:14:00 PM

I can just feel God smiling at you lovely poem. Wonder writing! Hugs, sally

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. I hope God is smiling. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 7/1/2021 12:00:00 AM

WHERE LOVE IS GOD THERE LOVE IS HOLY

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2021 11:33:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. So very true. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/23/2021 1:20:00 AM

Thank you, dear Lord, for reminding us of Your Almighty love through Paula's amazing poem:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2021 9:33:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your prayer. You made my day. I thank God many times a day for my many blessings. Thank You, just 2 little words that need to be used to God and to others. Have a blessed day..................

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/22/2021 9:16:00 PM

Yes we must thank God every day many times for his love. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2021 9:30:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your best in the contest. I thank God many times a day for my many blessings. Thank You, just 2 little words that need to be used to God and to others. Have a blessed day..................