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My precious one, you’re always in my heart. In troubled times, my spirits you renew. God willing, we will never be apart. I can’t envision living without you. My little ones, I eagerly convey you lift me up. How sweet to call you mine! Dear friends and family, to you I say our bond is close, akin to the divine. To all, you share my sad and happy times. You bolster me, inspiring me to dream. You're roses' fragrance, poems' perfect rhymes, but our great love will never be supreme. The utmost bridge to joy resides above, for we are only human; God is love. Date: May 15, 2020 Contest Title: Bridge over troubled waters sonnet contest placed 2nd Sponsor: John Hamilton May 21, 2020, entered in Brian's Choice O Contest placed 3rd

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Date: 5/21/2020 3:07:00 PM
Wow Janice! This is impressive, especially your ending! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/21/2020 3:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. Janice
Date: 5/21/2020 12:33:00 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you on your win Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/21/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Aditi. Janice
Date: 5/20/2020 4:04:00 PM
What a beautiful write Janice, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:06:00 PM
A beauty, Janice. Truly, God IS love. Cheers, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/17/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
Date: 5/16/2020 6:54:00 AM
Precious is the essence of your poem, Janice. Loved that Rumi quote. You say it all when you say:The utmost bridge to joy resides above, for we are only human; God is love.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/16/2020 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 5/15/2020 9:45:00 PM
This is beautifully penned in a poignant way. All the best! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/15/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Aditi. Janice

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