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Lost Upon The Ground

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ feather see-saws down its light, delicate splendor lost upon the ground

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2024 1:33:00 PM

love that first line. i can see it. ~ Kim

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 2:37:00 PM

thank you, Kim. Appreciate your visit and your remarks. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2024 7:40:00 PM

Unique. Loved it-

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:30:00 AM

thank you...appreciate your visit; glad you liked my poem. Enjoy your day, Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/26/2024 4:14:00 PM

so true Sara they need a good blast of air to keep afloat hugs Shadow

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 4:36:00 PM

good to see you, Shadow! Appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Wishing you well, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 4/26/2024 12:56:00 PM

I enjoyed your feather poem, Sara and love finding them these days. Up close, they're beautiful.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 4:37:00 PM

I agree, Lin. Up close feathers are intricately created and beautiful Glad you liked my poem. Appreciate you stopping by; wishing you a great weekend ahead, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2024 12:18:00 PM

Within my thoughts, I envision the feather gracefully descending towards the ground. Your imagery is very attractive.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 4:39:00 PM

appreciate your kind remarks, Sotto. I love watching feathers as they dance to the ground...they remind me of ballerinas eloquently and gracefully floating across the stage. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2024 6:22:00 AM

It is amazing to see a feather fall. The delicate grace is wonderful. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 4:39:00 PM

I agree with you, Sara K....they're fall so gracefully. Appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Have a great evening, Sara B

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/26/2024 5:10:00 AM

Moment beautifully captured, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 5:13:00 AM

grateful for your visit and kind remarks this morning. Have a splendid day, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2024 12:29:00 AM

I can visualise that feather floating down to the ground. Great imagery.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 5:00:00 AM

thank you for your supportive remarks, Victor. Yesterday, I saw a feather floating to the ground in my front yard--this Haiku was created! have a great day, Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/25/2024 11:33:00 PM

A very in-depth haiku.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/26/2024 4:54:00 AM

grateful for your visit and for your comments, Chris. Have a pleasant day, Sara