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Lost To Heaven My Grandmother

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it" Quote _ by E.E. Cummings Your touches, kisses, embraces; and each loving gesture; Your angel-filled, heaven-filled even phantom-filled stories; Your flavorful delicacies; thoughtfully-spun vesture; Your care when I was ill, more than my mother, for my ease... I competed, at your thrust, picking cashew-nuts and plums, Your encouragements made me successful in little works; Though I could find never a single tooth in your pink gums, There was a miraculous balm in your smile, with no smirks... Your dutifulness, compassion, warmth, affection and trust, Coolness in dealings; respect to all, full of innocence; Never feeling bored, as with everything you could adjust; Optimism and other virtues have become my essence... Rest In Peace, O Grandma, at the hands of eternity, Until we meet again in heavenly fraternity...! 10 September 2022 Writing Challenge- In My Heart- S Forms - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme: Lost to Heaven - Grandmother

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Date: 10/10/2022 4:44:00 PM
A very beautiful/lovely tribute written in a very beautiful form (sonnet) to your grandma my dear friend Christuraj! I'm sure your grandma is smiling and giving you the sweetest hug from above. Belated Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 10/8/2022 4:54:00 AM
I can feel the love and respect that you had for your grandmother contained in the lines of this work. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2022 9:24:00 AM
Christuraj, a very nice Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, I miss my grandma too, Constance
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Date: 9/13/2022 4:09:00 PM
Nice tribute to your grandma, Christuraj. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 9/11/2022 4:32:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet paying respects to your grandma, Chris ! It is indeed a blessing to have such a grand mother. I too had a lovely pair of grand parents! Greatly enjoyed. All the Best!
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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