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Lost the Warmth of the Sun - Contest

Octobers Kiss The summer that had past I wanted it to stay. ----------------------------------------------------- I see a man with a heart that has broken His yesterday's forsaken him, left no word spoken Looking back over his shoulder to what it had been Afraid to face forward, his pain is too keen Misses the warmth of living with summers love Now his life is like an October day, needing hat and glove The cold of winter has pierced through to his soul Bleeding the enamoured love, no longer a whole. Winter will pass followed by a spring's treasure trove Chirping birds, natures flower, and unfrequented love The sun will warm your beliefs no longer need the heat of a fire Your inner self will combust with natures love you so desire. Contest : Richard Lamoureux : Who do you think I am. Poem chosen Octobers Kiss Penned 13 September 2015.

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Date: 9/29/2015 1:24:00 AM
Very wonderful write Seren! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:55:00 PM
Seren, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
Wonderful poem
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:59:00 AM
You have summed up the man with these introspective words. Wonderful.
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Date: 9/28/2015 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Richard, for commenting and placing me ....Seren
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:30:00 AM
This is very touching Seren, thanks for entering my contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/28/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Richard, for commenting and placing me ....Seren

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