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The second limerick was inspired by Paul's wonderful comment. Enjoy:-)
There was a guy named Al who lost his smile And being happy and cheerful was not his style Until he met Dan A real funny Man He told jokes that would just amaze and beguile There's a funny lady who goes by the name Jan Who spreads out loads of laughter when she can Her writes are about poop Or bawdiness on the soup But bringing joy to us soupers is her ultimate plan 6-3-17

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Date: 6/6/2017 8:40:00 AM
Another top notch limerick, Alexis. Kudos for POTD. Funny as all outdoors. Ty for the smiles. Love and joy always.
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Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM
Hah, that was funny Alexis, I see Jan loves it too :D
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Date: 6/5/2017 11:38:00 PM
Congrats for POTD with these funny limericks, Alexis
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Rick. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 3:20:00 PM
Hi Alexis...revisiting this Limerick now that it has become 2 Limericks and gained POTD in the process:) Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/6/2017 1:02:00 AM
Hi Paul, If it wasn't for your comment on the first one, the second limerick wouldn't exist. Thank you so much for inspiring me:-)Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 1:27:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on POTD:-) I'm absolutely delighted for you Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:32:00 AM
Thank you so much. It was my pleasure to write a limerick about you:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 12:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Alexis - Funny :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 11:26:00 AM
That is so cute and a perfect limerick for Jan. Congrats on POTD as well my friend. I know that made you smile. :)
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Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:41:00 AM
Hi Chris, When I saw that this piece selected P.O.T.D. It put a huge smile on my face. I appreciate your continued support my friend:-)Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/5/2017 1:28:00 PM
It sure made my day Chris:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/5/2017 9:17:00 AM
Congrats on POtd Alexis
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 9:10:00 AM
Awe how funny cute :) Congrats Alexis on your potd... hugs :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations Alexis for POTD honors:)
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 7:27:00 AM
What fun! Congratulations Alexis for POTD honors. Anything about Jan and poop deserves an award...
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie:-)Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/5/2017 1:24:00 PM
ha ha ha I love that comment Charlie - i am delighted for Alexis:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/5/2017 6:57:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the smile :) congrats on potd
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Maureen:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 5:06:00 AM
My favorite is the one about Jan. So true and a sweet tribute to her! ; )
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:48:00 AM
It was my pleasure to write a limerick about Jan. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/5/2017 1:24:00 PM
I'm blushing here Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/5/2017 3:59:00 AM
Congrats Alexis, such a good write, so deserving of POTD
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 1:38:00 AM
NO COMPLAIN SIR U KILLED IT...
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:50:00 AM
Sir? Thank you so much Reuben:-) Alexis
Date: 6/5/2017 1:03:00 AM
This is a fun Limerick, Alexis Hugs to you!
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Date: 6/6/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara:-) Alexis
Date: 6/4/2017 7:42:00 PM
You also bring joy to soupers, Alexis. Big hugs for you.
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for that awesome comment:-) Alexis
Date: 6/4/2017 5:45:00 PM
A Lovely limer-bute ( not butt) ....lol
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Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:53:00 AM
Lol! Thank you so much Tim:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/5/2017 1:26:00 PM
leave my butt out of it - you know where poop comes from lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/4/2017 5:39:00 PM
So cute this is great Alexis!!! Hugs
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Arthur:-) Alexis
Date: 6/4/2017 5:36:00 PM
aww Alexis I am blushing now:-) I do try to bring a smile to people with my silly poems but i do surprise sometimes with a more serious poem... I have no control over my muse and long may it continue!!!:-) hugs Jan xx into faves xxx
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Date: 6/4/2017 5:49:00 PM
Hi Jan, I'm glad you liked it. I know you have a serious side and you do amazing with your serious writes, but I do enjoy your humour. Thanks for bringing loads of laughter:-) Alexis
Date: 6/4/2017 5:27:00 PM
Nice ones. Jan is sure to love your tribute to her in the second limerick!
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Date: 6/6/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea:-)Alexis
Date: 6/4/2017 9:50:00 AM
This is very cute, Alexis. Apart from Dan I know of a Jan who is capable of bring smiles to our face:) Regards // paul
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Date: 6/4/2017 9:53:00 AM
Hi Paul, It's good to see you. How have you been? You are right , maybe I should remove the "D" and add a "J":-) Alexis
Date: 6/3/2017 4:50:00 PM
Nicely done Alexis..
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Date: 6/4/2017 9:58:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis