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The second limerick was inspired by Paul's wonderful comment. Enjoy:-)

Lost Smile : Revised

There was a guy named Al who lost his smile 
And being happy and cheerful was not his style
                       Until he met Dan
                       A real funny Man
He told jokes that would just amaze and beguile


There's a funny lady who goes by the name Jan
Who spreads out loads of laughter when she can
                Her writes are about poop
                Or bawdiness on the soup
But bringing joy to us soupers is her ultimate plan











6-3-17

humorouslimerick

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/6/2017 8:40:00 AM

Another top notch limerick, Alexis. Kudos for POTD. Funny as all outdoors. Ty for the smiles. Love and joy always.

Darren White

Date: 6/6/2017 8:24:00 AM

Hah, that was funny Alexis, I see Jan loves it too :D

White Wolf

Date: 6/5/2017 11:38:00 PM

Congrats for POTD with these funny limericks, Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:25:00 AM

Thanks Rick. I appreciate your continued support:-)Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2017 3:20:00 PM

Hi Alexis...revisiting this Limerick now that it has become 2 Limericks and gained POTD in the process:) Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:02:00 AM

Hi Paul, If it wasn't for your comment on the first one, the second limerick wouldn't exist. Thank you so much for inspiring me:-)Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 6/5/2017 1:27:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on POTD:-) I'm absolutely delighted for you Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:32:00 AM

Thank you so much. It was my pleasure to write a limerick about you:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2017 12:36:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Alexis - Funny :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 6/5/2017 11:26:00 AM

That is so cute and a perfect limerick for Jan. Congrats on POTD as well my friend. I know that made you smile. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:41:00 AM

Hi Chris, When I saw that this piece selected P.O.T.D. It put a huge smile on my face. I appreciate your continued support my friend:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 1:28:00 PM

It sure made my day Chris:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/5/2017 9:17:00 AM

Congrats on POtd Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph:-) Alexis

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/5/2017 9:10:00 AM

Awe how funny cute :) Congrats Alexis on your potd... hugs :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Akkina:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/5/2017 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis for POTD honors:)

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/5/2017 7:27:00 AM

What fun! Congratulations Alexis for POTD honors. Anything about Jan and poop deserves an award...

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 1:24:00 PM

ha ha ha I love that comment Charlie - i am delighted for Alexis:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 6/5/2017 6:57:00 AM

Yay! Thanks for the smile :) congrats on potd

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Maureen:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/5/2017 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD!

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/5/2017 5:06:00 AM

My favorite is the one about Jan. So true and a sweet tribute to her! ; )

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:48:00 AM

It was my pleasure to write a limerick about Jan. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 1:24:00 PM

I'm blushing here Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Maria Williams

Date: 6/5/2017 3:59:00 AM

Congrats Alexis, such a good write, so deserving of POTD

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria:-) Alexis

Reuben Malekutu

Date: 6/5/2017 1:38:00 AM

NO COMPLAIN SIR U KILLED IT...

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:50:00 AM

Sir? Thank you so much Reuben:-) Alexis

Sara Ella

Date: 6/5/2017 1:03:00 AM

This is a fun Limerick, Alexis Hugs to you!

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara:-) Alexis

Lin Lane

Date: 6/4/2017 7:42:00 PM

You also bring joy to soupers, Alexis. Big hugs for you.

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for that awesome comment:-) Alexis

Tim Smith

Date: 6/4/2017 5:45:00 PM

A Lovely limer-bute ( not butt) ....lol

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:53:00 AM

Lol! Thank you so much Tim:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 1:26:00 PM

leave my butt out of it - you know where poop comes from lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2017 5:39:00 PM

So cute this is great Alexis!!! Hugs

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/6/2017 12:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Arthur:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2017 5:36:00 PM

aww Alexis I am blushing now:-) I do try to bring a smile to people with my silly poems but i do surprise sometimes with a more serious poem... I have no control over my muse and long may it continue!!!:-) hugs Jan xx into faves xxx

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/4/2017 5:49:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm glad you liked it. I know you have a serious side and you do amazing with your serious writes, but I do enjoy your humour. Thanks for bringing loads of laughter:-) Alexis