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Lost Marbles

L unar influences on my mind O ften make my senses all go blind S anity takes a vacation break T ranquility inside is now at stake M y balanced nature is thrown askew A nd I no longer know the truths I knew R ambling is my spoken tongue B elievable reality all comes undone L ook inside my head and see E mptiness where marbles used to be S ans of all my sanity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 4:33:00 PM
The word Marbles drew me in. However you through me a curve, using marbles in a way I did not expect. Good job. BTW I have some of the marbles I had as a lad back in the 1930s
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:07:00 PM
Congrats, Joe! Love this one!! I'm feeling like this tonight. Is it a full moon? Maybe it's just me...Lol...love and blessings :))
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:54:00 PM
joe.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 8/9/2012 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! loved your humorous entry -it made me smile :)
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:31:00 PM
I love that you took the humorous approach. I was thinking of looking up phrases with the word Lost (until my own idea for lost love came to me) I may have very well have tried writing on lost marbles too. I sure have enough of them!!! congrats on win.
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:30:00 PM
Congrats Joe.
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:15:00 PM
Nicely done Joe. I was expecting to read a poem about real marbles. Congratulations. Love Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2012 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations and well done. Lee
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:01:00 AM
Don't worry Joe, I lost my marbles years ago! Great write-good luck!~Tirzah~
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