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Lost in Thought

I've had my moments Scattered over decades Imperceptible as special Until never repeated I forego new moments To be lost in old ones To find an old version of self or time See it shine in a way that wasn't true Focus removes the tainted periphery "Ahh a piece of string, I remember it This string is special to me" ~ Finding meaning is special to me ~ For I've not always been this way Times haven't always been hard My mind offers up my Nanna's 'Blackpool shoes' Bought because her feet hurt & they saved the day I remember her finding them again Sharing the moment I'm there, with a pair of sandals & a truly happy face

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/14/2024 10:09:00 PM

So many memories of minor incidentals pop up at various times. I feel those moments are "down times'. I liked this poem you graciously shared.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/14/2024 10:18:00 PM

Thank you Hilda, I quite like memories of ordinary days. They are usually the ones I'd choose to step by back into for a moment x

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/14/2024 12:18:00 PM

I forego new moments to be lost in old ones, we really do have an inbuilt Time Machine in our minds Dilly, amazing how we latch onto a string of thought, and follow it back to its source, a nostalgically sad poem in many ways, but beautifully expressed nonetheless, love the happy face ending:) cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/14/2024 1:30:00 PM

Thanks David, you're very kind spending time with my poem. I quite enjoy seeing what my brain will summon up with ideas like this. I loved looking through treasures at my grandparents and the best are just stories that light up faces really. There must be a million better ones that Blackpool shoes but she was just so thrilled with these rather ordinary sandals (with a squishy sole) that I can't help but love the moment 'Blackpool shoes' - as if they held magic :)

John Lawless

Date: 4/14/2024 7:26:00 AM

Nicely written DD, smooth subtle invitations to ...follow me...i have something to show you melancholy.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/14/2024 7:50:00 AM

Sweet John, thank you