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Lost In This Cruel World

Sure all we can do is our best in the end 
like forgiving him as he knows not the trial of untruths 
Justice of his curse why condemn someone wrongfully 
Now that really hurts deeply branded as something 

I am clearly not as God is my witness 
slept on the streets even then 
did not steal or beg it speaks for the person
I was brought up to be in God's eyes

Lost everything in business from pride one demon fell 
humble and meek lessons in life learned 
now judgement falsely against me falls one very heavy burden across shoulders 
this was around the time my poor son was in Great Ormond Street Hospital  

After his heart by pass enough on my plate God granted a miracle 
this time it was like Hell on earth part of nightmare opening deep wounds 
rotting injustices of it all Donald Duck taxi driver from a different world 
they believe a Micky mouse story cannot work it out in my head

betrayalblessingemotionsfeelingsjudgementfree verse

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Paul Callus

January 28, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Hey, my friend....where there is faith and hope, strength will come from above to help you overcome it all. If human justice fails, be sure that the divine one will not. All the best. // paul

Liam Mcdaid

January 29, 2015 at 4:51 PM

paul thats the great comfort i have is my faith looking at this life as short compared to eternity it will be then truth will heavenly sing wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated

Funom Makama

January 28, 2015 at 8:15 AM

Great lines with blessed words. Thanks for the magnificent share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

Liam Mcdaid

January 29, 2015 at 4:45 PM

best as can be smiling on trial tuesday wonderful comment bless you

M. L. Kiser

January 26, 2015 at 4:37 PM

That has quite an impact...I hope things are better now, but that's quite a piece of work.

Liam Mcdaid

January 29, 2015 at 7:05 AM

no in fact i am just going through it thank god he is my guardian as even a close friend stood over and judged me i forgive them as they are blind to the truth and facts wonderful comment bless you deeply appreciated

Poesy Relish

January 26, 2015 at 2:35 PM

A powerful write... whatever problems you might be g6oing through may God ease your mind and may all your pronlems be solved... have faith... lov, nad!

Liam Mcdaid

January 28, 2015 at 8:35 AM

my mind is only tortured in the lie being forced on me but in the heart is at peace knowing the truth faith is my beacon thank you kindly nad for the beautiful comment dear friend bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 26, 2015 at 1:09 PM

..... Many thoughts in your head, dear Liam ...... forget Donald and Mickey .... believe in yourself ! - Powerfully written - Fingers crossed for you : X & X - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

January 28, 2015 at 8:28 AM

sure is anne lise not knowing the end results always plays on the worst case senario wonderful comment thank you deeply pal bless you

Eileen Manassian

January 26, 2015 at 1:05 PM

I'm so sorry to read this, Liam. My heart aches for you. I wish that all this would end that you will be exonerated. It is an unfair world and bad things DO happen to good people. Never doubt yourself, or who you are. Keep strong in the faith. I know that you believe in God. There is a reason for all that happens, and good can come out of this. Remember Romans 8:28- and we know that ALL things work together for good for those who love God. May He give you the strength to stand firm. HUGS

Liam Mcdaid

January 28, 2015 at 8:26 AM

faith in the truth always makes me happy eileen a prayer answered maybe in the end i get justice in the next world so it gives my heart peace thank you deeply pal wonderful comment bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 26, 2015 at 11:02 AM

Hi Liam! My dearest friend, as you know I'm so very sad and sorry about your whole situation and the injustices that you're facing and suffering not just now but for a long while. You're not alone! I'm here praying for you that justice shall be served and you'll be clear of all accusations and walk free. I believe that you're innocent and a victim.God knows your heart is very beautiful and pure. So, don't lose hope! You may feel lost in this cruel world but you're not lost to God, and people who truly love you,Liam. God is with you always! God knows what's best for all!Be positive and stay strong in your unfailing faith in that justice shall be done by you with God's divine help. Miracles happen, He listens our prayers. Just hold on to all your dreams and hopes. May God grant you the peace you're seeking for! May you feel the warmth of God and His Angels all the time around you. God bless you always! Wish you all the best! Have a very lovely day! Love and hugs! :)XXXOXXOXX D. ^O^

Liam Mcdaid

January 28, 2015 at 8:22 AM

thank you dorian for the wonderful comment truth is the light of hope i pray towards bless you dear friend

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