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Lost In the Mist

The graying mists rise and enshroud him, he suspended, lies on a short thread of life, while gathered in small knots of worry, we keep hopeless watch, while I, his beloved wife, resent the others, wanting them to be beyond the misty veil. I'll bear the strife. I welcome in his mother, frail and weak, but other than our prayers, we do not speak. By: Joyce Johnson 8/22/14 I single spaced, but this is what comes up. I will try to get it back in shape. For contest: Through The Mist

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Date: 5/18/2018 5:07:00 AM
simply beautiful
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:55:00 PM
etched in a most defining way.. i love how this ended, joyce.. very creative.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:30:00 PM
unique take on the form Joyce. many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:16:00 AM
Joyce that's a brilliant take my friend ! Wish u luck! Trying something today on this form!
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:42:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme of mist, Joyce.
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Date: 8/22/2014 9:46:00 PM
iNTERESTING jOYCE!!
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