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lost in romance

. i vision her off far reclining 'pon her spacious bedroom window's mantel whispering mine name once waiting for it's last echo 'fore 'pon her down smiling drifting

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Date: 2/27/2024 9:31:00 PM
Great imagery!
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/27/2024 9:39:00 PM
;)
Date: 2/27/2024 8:13:00 PM
Nice write. I especially liked "whispering mine name once waiting for it's last echo" A whispering echo - beautiful!
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James Peranteau
Date: 2/27/2024 9:39:00 PM
ty ;)

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