Lost In a Poet's Thoughts

Floating black ink drifts away in my mind
Thin strands caught in trembling winds of thought
Winding through realms my body will not find
Climbing like vines on words my mind forgot
Within its blackness, dreams are surveyed
Rendering thought with a weathered disguise
Reason daunting, illusion conveyed
Imagination flows from formless dark eyes
Hiding in caverns deep in the mind's cave
This black ink rushes through, covering me
Exposing my soul, whose eyes I'm a slave
And captures the truth, before it can flee
Can I find words to light my soul's fire?
Will I lay silent, when not inspired?


5/17/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/8/2020 10:58:00 AM
- An "old" poem came out in the sunshine ... and it is a wonderful poem, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 7:57:00 AM
You are a master of sonnets, a goldie oldie... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:28:00 PM
Frederic, nice win...PD
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:49:00 PM
Excellent Sonnet, Frederic. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:51:00 AM
4th 5th and 6 th lines these are my faves.. The two questions at the end are worth pondering..:)KUDOS!
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:32:00 AM
i can imagine the magic of this moment, frederic.. warm congrats and huggs!
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:14:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, frederic
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:43:00 PM
Brilliantly penned.. Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:30:00 PM
Amazing write Frederic ! lovely sonnet ,, i find writing so difficult,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:20:00 PM
Mesmerizing words, a hypnotic dance through your mind, well said.
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