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Lost In a Poet's Thoughts

Floating black ink drifts away in my mind Thin strands caught in trembling winds of thought Winding through realms my body will not find Climbing like vines on words my mind forgot Within its blackness, dreams are surveyed Rendering thought with a weathered disguise Reason daunting, illusion conveyed Imagination flows from formless dark eyes Hiding in caverns deep in the mind's cave This black ink rushes through, covering me Exposing my soul, whose eyes I'm a slave And captures the truth, before it can flee Can I find words to light my soul's fire? Will I lay silent, when not inspired? 5/17/14

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Date: 10/8/2020 10:58:00 AM
- An "old" poem came out in the sunshine ... and it is a wonderful poem, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 7:57:00 AM
You are a master of sonnets, a goldie oldie... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:28:00 PM
Frederic, nice win...PD
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:49:00 PM
Excellent Sonnet, Frederic. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:51:00 AM
4th 5th and 6 th lines these are my faves.. The two questions at the end are worth pondering..:)KUDOS!
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Date: 5/28/2014 10:32:00 AM
i can imagine the magic of this moment, frederic.. warm congrats and huggs!
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Date: 5/28/2014 12:14:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, frederic
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Date: 5/27/2014 11:43:00 PM
Brilliantly penned.. Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:30:00 PM
Amazing write Frederic ! lovely sonnet ,, i find writing so difficult,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/17/2014 8:20:00 PM
Mesmerizing words, a hypnotic dance through your mind, well said.
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