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Lost In a Melody

i listened to a melody inspired by a virtuoso it was as deep as deep could be i dove in and meandered i traveled and i wandered let myself be carried by its currents surrendered to its charms i journeyed as an observer awestruck by its world and felt honored to be allowed as if welcomed i wondered how it might be to live in such a world of fantasy when i remembered my own right here yet unexplored AP: 1st place 2021 Submitted on May 27, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE X sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD originally posted on February 20, 2019

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Date: 2/21/2019 12:13:00 AM
"let myself be carried by its currents" - yes, so many melodies come unbidden into my head and carry me away to younger days. Nicely written, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 10:08:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 2/20/2019 9:45:00 PM
o dear poet, the truth and I am convicted to my core...which is a good and necessary thing... well said! (captcha is "YES")
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, PS.
Date: 2/20/2019 9:34:00 PM
poetry and music are close cousins wonderful poem
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy.

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