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Lost Idol

Your grandma's feeling sad today. You may have seen her cry. Someone is gone forever Whom she'd hoped would never die. She's remembering the long ago When she was just a girl And his piercing blue eyes from the screen Could set her heart awhirl. He is gone with all the others Who had played important part In her dreams and silly fancies, Before Grandpa had her heart. Richard, Ronald and Gregory, David and Rock, Jimmy and John, Henry and Frank and Montgomery All of her idols are gone. Each has taken a little piece Of a sweet and carefree time When these heroes of the silver screen Were hers for just a dime. She's crying for her favorite, Paul And just a little for her self As she plucks the salad dressing Bearing his face, from off the shelf. No. 1 in contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/13/2011 12:38:00 PM
Indeed, each name you mention lives on in the old movies, that will forever be my favorites! Paul Newman left more than his movies...he cared to leave his contributions to good causes with his brand-name products. Lovely poem, Joyce!
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Date: 7/13/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st Place, Joyce. Excellent piece. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/13/2011 3:29:00 AM
My congratulations on this first place win in the contest Joyce
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:25:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in the movie star contest Joyce ... a brilliant piece luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 9:22:00 AM
Oh, Hon, at first I was concerned this poem was about your ailing brother. Paul Newman really was one of the screen's all-time greats. He was a talented actor who got better looking as he grew older. His Newman's Own spaghetti sauce is the next best thing to home made. You picked a great star to write about, Joyce. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2011 11:41:00 AM
this was so creative nicely done how are things going? cory
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