Debbie Guzzi Poet Sonnet

Lost and Lonely Waifs

Standing in the frigid wind outside the bus stop doors
She seemed lost and lonely as the cars past with a roar.
Waiting for my only child the son whom I adore
I couldn’t help but wonder where was she headed for?

The prodigal returned through those same two frosty doors
But though the night was getting dark no one came for her.
Stopping right beside her, the radio blaring a Christmas score
We asked her if she needed help could we do any more?

Her wind burnt cheeks rose with the smile she wore
“Thank you, no.” She said. Her eyes they did explore
the warm interior and the street stretched out before
My folks are late but coming soon at least I’m pretty sure…

We left her there before the door yet still my heart implores
How many lost and lonely waifs are left standing by the door? 

*Monorhyme is Sonnet form using slip or half rhyme.
Some good deeds go unaccepted.

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Robert Lindley July 18, 2015 at 11:19 AM Decided to start to see your beginning poems here. A fine sonnet and wonderfully written poem my friend. Sonnets are my favored form to write and to read. I hope to have time to explore more your writings. A very solid 7 on this one. Debbie Guzzi July 18, 2015 at 12:02 PM Thank you so much YES sonnets were a first love with me as well - do try all the different kinds of sonnets!

Barbara Gorelick May 28, 2011 at 9:08 PM Congrats Deb..You did what you could. makes me sad though..I hope someone came. BG

Jack Horne May 28, 2011 at 11:22 AM Many congratulations on your great win, Debbie: )

Wilma Neels May 28, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your win Debbie ;)

Francine Roberts May 28, 2011 at 7:54 AM congrats on your win in the contest Debbie

Dr.Ram Mehta May 27, 2011 at 3:34 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Debbie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 27, 2011 at 10:21 AM Congratulations, Debbie, on your placement in my contest. As you know, my dear friend, I always judge them blind, without knowing who the authors are. So, when I come here to see who won, I get a wonderful surprise. It is so nice to see you here among the winners. Thank you for supporting my contest...and for your patience in waiting for the results. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown May 27, 2011 at 9:43 AM Congratulatons on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 27, 2011 at 9:10 AM congrats Debbie on your terrific win in good deeds contest .. another elegant entry and write luv..enjoy as u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend.. beach time for me ..oh..90 degrees ..off we go..luv..

Sidney Beck January 9, 2011 at 2:25 PM Deb, I entirely agree with the sentiment and like the way the monorhyme seems to emphasise the message, kinda like drilling it home....nice technique....best wishes .....Syd

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2011 at 3:15 PM DEb,here is a really nice sonnet from you that I had never seen. THis was so enjoyable to read. And a very interesting quote at the end of this about some good deeds to unaccepted! How are you, Deb? Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2010 at 4:41 PM D.G. a wonderful way to show us how many are left stood up.. enjoyed your poem, and may this year bring you lots of cheers & new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,..p.d.