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Lost and Alone

~ Wandering alone Lost in the morning silence A worried heart weeps ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/8/2019 5:40:00 PM

A great senryu transmiiting so much emotion in a few words.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend for always being so nice to me.

John Lawless

Date: 12/5/2019 7:34:00 AM

a sharply piercing three lines Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2019 11:26:00 AM

Thanks so much John.

Hello There

Date: 12/4/2019 10:59:00 PM

Glad to know things turned around...This was a touching piece.

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you my friend. :)

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/4/2019 6:38:00 PM

In a word...Excellent, Peter

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Peter.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/4/2019 3:17:00 PM

so much feeling in just a few words! you've captured it well, chris...

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Ilene. :)

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 12/4/2019 1:35:00 PM

Says a thousand words Chris. Excellent..Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 1:41:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/4/2019 12:09:00 PM

One can feel the sadness in your words Chris little poem big impact.

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Sandy, but now can you feel the happiness in my reply to your comment, because it is there. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/4/2019 12:06:00 PM

Oh, I feel sadness, loneliness and worry Chris. I pray for peace :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you so very much Heidi for always being so nice to me.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/4/2019 11:17:00 AM

aw, Chris, your senryu has the same emotional plight as a poem I'm about to post. We need to cheer them up. I hope all is well with your heart.

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Lin. All is good now...just a moment I needed to share. I appreciate your kindness and it really is nice to see you again.