Lost

I FEEL YOU LEFT TO SOON I SEE THAT OVER TIME I STILL GOT BLOOD IN MY WOUNDS I NEVER PICTURED YOU LEAVING YOU SAID NO WORDS NO GOODBYE NO MORE EARLY MORNING TV MY MOTHER YOU WILL ALWAYS BE I KNOW WHY A CAGE BIRD SINGS OUCH OUCH OUCH IS IT NORMAL TO STILL THINK OF YOU ITS PLENTY ROOM ON EARTH COME BACK JUST APPEAR ONCE I NEED YOU MORE THEN EMPTY SPACES IN MY HEART MY HEART IS MISSING... ALONG WITH YOU IS THAT YOU I FEEL ON SHOULDERS SOMETIMES ALL IM DOING IS LOOKING FOR YOU THEY SAY IM LOST BECAUSE YOUR GONE IM LOST BECAUSE YOU LEFT WITHOUT ME IM LOST BECAUSE GOODBYE WASNT SAID I JUST REALIZED THAT YOUR DEAD.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2016 1:21:00 PM

Tia B., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 8/1/2016 10:08:00 AM

a very touching poem Tia;)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2016 2:01:00 PM

Such a dark sad first post Tia:-( welcome to Poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelli White

Date: 7/31/2016 12:25:00 PM

Bless you in your time of need.

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2016 11:55:00 AM

Tia Blue,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**