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Little One ... Why do you weep? Far too lovely a day for such sorrow ... Too tender and sweet a cheek to stain with tears. Your little trinket is not gone ... not really ... Yes, it is lost beyond your reach, beyond the shimmer of the sun, But you know it so well, have studied and memorized its shape ... You have held it and played with it for so long, Placed its color and form and delight deep within your mind, And the joy it brought you is locked away in your heart's keep. Perhaps it has left you now, as all things will, someday, But don't you see? That is as it should be, Little One ... For the loss of what we love, is the price we pay for the joy it brings us - The reminder of its value and worth and affect on our lives. Our sorrow is but the ache of love everlasting, And each time you remember your precious bauble, Each time you feel the tug of separation from it on your spirit, You will be reminded of how dear it was to you, how priceless, And you will think of its shape and shine ... The smooth feel of it in your palm ... You will smile from the joy its memory brings you, yet, And it will NEVER be gone from you ... not really. For like you, Little One, It shines ... still. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Pick D, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 4/24/2020 2:04:00 PM
Ah! I remember this beauty, Greg:-) Congratulations on your fine win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 4/24/2020 12:56:00 PM
So subtle a thought between loss and love. Haven't seen it pointed to so well...at least recently. Or since the last time a wise write moved me. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/24/2020 1:29:00 PM
This is a very thoughtful and heartfelt comment, Greg, and it means a great deal, as your opinion is one I value highly ... many thanks and blessings to you for taking the time, and for appreciating the deeper message here. Blessings, My Friend!
Date: 3/23/2019 2:21:00 AM
Congrats Gregory.. How much I loved this poem.. for loss of what we love... I liked this line best... This will be etched in memory for a long time.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:10:00 PM
What a wonderfully kind and heartfelt comment, Debjani, thank you SO much, this means a lot to me ... blessings to you and yours, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/22/2019 6:11:00 PM
such emotion in your lines Greg I love the empathy you had with the child and their loss:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:09:00 PM
That's such a sweet observation and kind compliment, Jan, thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/22/2019 4:03:00 PM
Greg, thank you for entering my contest. You had clear and fascinating imagery and great rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Come and visit me on my blog https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35331&PoetID=57242 Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Eve, I'm so sorry for being so late with this, I got so lost this winter, (in many ways) ... this meant a lot to me. Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3 (I will check it out!)
Date: 3/20/2019 7:17:00 PM
"For the loss of what we love, is the price we pay for the joy it brings us" Love this line, and the entire poem itself! Marvelous work as always, Greg!:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:07:00 PM
You are very kind, my friend, and always so eloquent ... blessings to you, Poet Brother! :-)
Date: 3/20/2019 12:21:00 PM
Exquisite, Greg...such a deep, soulful approach to the theme and very touching words of wisdom for the hearts of young and old alike. Putting this beauty into my favs and wishing you all the best for the contest. Hope you are having a great day. Sandra 3> :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:07:00 PM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Sandra - thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 3/20/2019 9:55:00 AM
A priceless missive, Gregory. Sweetly done, with romantical words.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Caren! :-) <3
Date: 3/20/2019 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful metaphor! So often baubles are synonymous with a giver, an occasion, a lost loved one, etc. etc.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/27/2019 3:06:00 PM
Indeed, Sunlite, well-said! Thank you for your kind words, Friend! :-) <3

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