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Loss of Freedom

My heart is incarcerated. Will it ever know freedom once more? For since I have met you It has been ripped and shred apart, Played with and abused beyond my control. Occasions came when you gave me your nectar, Allowed me like a bee to savor your sweetness, And then discarded me for days on end. Then shall I ponder on the emptiness That love can give to a caring heart. I wallow wantonly in despondent deception. So I have changed, grew cynical and angry, And I will never regain my sanity Until I find some form of equilibrium, Some form of placid peace of mind. But will I be able to achieve any If I continue to hanker over you? This can only occur when I Shall have the guts to admit my fault, Seek meekness and kneel down To pray to my Father who is in Heaven. Bring my love back to me.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2021 10:50:00 AM

- I feel these lines deep in my soul, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/13/2021 2:36:00 PM

A write from the heart Victor, most of us have been there, wanting, waiting and anticipating. Sometimes we have to let go or spend our time in the misery of sorrow. Be happy in the now, tomorrow will take care of itself… Hugs, Belle

Judy Ball

Date: 9/13/2021 8:19:00 AM

This is such a heartfelt piece. One who is entranced by one who plays hard to get. A wise man tries for awhile and then realizes he should spend his time elsewhere. People who use others are not worth your time. Great write filled with emotion. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2021 5:39:00 AM

Can feel your emotions darting here and there. God bless!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/13/2021 1:06:00 AM

My heart is incarcerated. Will it ever know freedom once more?.....What a perfect start to a poem filled with self-doubt

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2021 3:27:00 PM

very nice, Victor, and I enjoyed seeing the word hanker appear in this poem. it's a word I just taught my ESL students!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/12/2021 10:38:00 AM

I like the way this touching poem on heartbreak ends with resolution and hope. Hugs.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/12/2021 10:01:00 AM

So deep and emotional... Loved the sentiments throughout and also the conclusion...

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/12/2021 7:08:00 AM

It's a fascinating piece of writing that has been brilliantly written. Victor, I really appreciated your altruistic poem today, and it had a great emotional weight on me.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/12/2021 6:05:00 AM

Even in expression of grief--loss of love--your thoughts prosper. Evocative write. Well done, Victor.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/12/2021 5:26:00 AM

How we have learned all these acts of self preservations from our fore fathers and mothers, and one day we realize that love is the only thing that heals, so we let go, I enjoyed your humanistic poem today, Have a blessed day, Love xo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/12/2021 4:51:00 AM

Wonderful emotional expression Victor! hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/12/2021 3:22:00 AM

Comes from your heart, Victor, I like the way you end it with finding true peace in the Lord:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/12/2021 2:09:00 AM

Doesnt sound too solid the relationship Victor, if she's that way inclined maybe it's time to move on. Tom