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Stand in pouring rain Why I cry Grave stones in marble 6/16/2018

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Date: 6/24/2018 3:52:00 PM
beautiful in its melancholy
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/25/2018 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, I really appreciate your very kind comment and support. :))
Date: 6/22/2018 6:17:00 AM
Absolutely powerful.
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/24/2018 4:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Kai, your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 6/17/2018 5:24:00 AM
I think this is one we can all relate too at some point in our lives Roy. Well written. Tom.
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/17/2018 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Tom, I agree, we all have or will feel grief sometime in our lifetime, thank you so much for your support and encouragement much appreciated my friend. :))
Date: 6/16/2018 9:12:00 PM
Your poem is so beautifully sad Roy. Very poignant and straight to the heart. Fantastic atmospheric and emotional imagery. Best wishes for a win my wonderful friend. ~Susan
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/17/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Susan, I actually felt quite emotional while writing this must be getting soft in my old age, thanks again for your support and encouragement my friend. :)
Date: 6/16/2018 11:50:00 AM
aww such a sad story in so few words Roy:-( hugs jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/16/2018 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your very kind comment, I really appreciate your support thank you. :))
Date: 6/16/2018 11:20:00 AM
Very profound, could be a winner, fingers crossed for you. Mick
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/16/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Mick really appreciated my friend. :))
Date: 6/16/2018 10:21:00 AM
Powerful Roy! Well done :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/16/2018 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi much appreciated. :))

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