Loss

Stand in pouring rain

       Why I cry

Grave stones in marble


6/16/2018

gravelossmiss youfree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2018 at 3:52 PM

beautiful in its melancholy

Roy Pett

June 25, 2018 at 6:43 AM

Thank you so much Andrea, I really appreciate your very kind comment and support. :))

Kai Michael Neumann

June 22, 2018 at 6:17 AM

Absolutely powerful.

Roy Pett

June 24, 2018 at 4:16 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Kai, your support is really appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

June 17, 2018 at 5:24 AM

I think this is one we can all relate too at some point in our lives Roy. Well written. Tom.

Roy Pett

June 17, 2018 at 5:54 AM

Thanks Tom, I agree, we all have or will feel grief sometime in our lifetime, thank you so much for your support and encouragement much appreciated my friend. :))

Susan Ashley

June 16, 2018 at 9:12 PM

Your poem is so beautifully sad Roy. Very poignant and straight to the heart. Fantastic atmospheric and emotional imagery. Best wishes for a win my wonderful friend. ~Susan

Roy Pett

June 17, 2018 at 5:51 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Susan, I actually felt quite emotional while writing this must be getting soft in my old age, thanks again for your support and encouragement my friend. :)