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Lord of Little Laughs

A happy giggle, Like ringing of bells, Cheeks like rosy bush, Child’s belly laughter, Lilting brook in rush! teeth white as milk, Eyes shine in glee, through angel lips Hear heaven’s hum! Rainbow sky, Singing birds, buds of spring. Lord laughs, In child’s, Joy! Written 21/05/2020 Honourable mention Sponsor Emile Pinet Diminished hexaverse

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Date: 5/24/2020 9:44:00 PM
This is a delight to read! I love fairy poems, and this is a fave!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/25/2020 1:29:00 AM
Thanks Caren! Pleased you like, Fave is an honour!
Date: 5/24/2020 2:44:00 AM
Back to you with congratulations sir.:-) I told you that it'll be a win .:-) May good luck be with you for all your works sir. Have a great day.Take care. With regards~Deepa
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/24/2020 3:18:00 AM
Thanks Deepa, Yes, indeed! Right you were. Happy a poem on a child was recognised. Mostly people write about grown ups. Nice to write about children! I am very fond of children having grown up around a lot of them!
Date: 5/24/2020 12:14:00 AM
Lovely sweet verse Krish..Congrats on your placement..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/24/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thanks Jenish! Pleased.:)
Date: 5/23/2020 5:41:00 PM
So glad to see your entry in the final list Krish. Congratulations! God bless you :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/24/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Aditi.
Date: 5/22/2020 6:27:00 AM
I agree. A quick glance at a child and those innocent expressions has the power to give us a glimpse of divinity. Beautifully penned. All the best Krish :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 5:48:00 AM
Very true! I believe Krishna Leela is his way of showing the world how easily the Almighty can be found in the innocence of children. No doubt that Lord Krishna is the most admired God of Hindu religion worldwide and a source of inspiration and curiosity for people following different beliefs and faith. :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/22/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, children are divine incarnate in many cultures and Krishna leela is founded on that belief.
Date: 5/22/2020 6:01:00 AM
It's true 'Lord laughs in child's joy'..!! Very nice poem sir. All the best to you in the contest Sir. I guess it'll be a win.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/24/2020 2:45:00 AM
The sponsor liked it:-)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/22/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Deepa. Appreciate your positive words, and hope the sponsor likes it as much!:)
Date: 5/21/2020 1:49:00 PM
That's right..." In Child's Joy" Nice title too
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/21/2020 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Arturo! Happy you like it! Regards!

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