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Lord, I Pantoum You

LORD, I PANTOUM YOU Lord, I pantoum You Creator of Heaven and Earth Mankind made in Your Image Placed in the Garden of Eden Creator of Heaven and Earth Scenes of unequal beauty Placed in the Garden of Eden For the pleasure of mankind Scenes of unequal beauty So lovely to behold The splendor so breathtaking But there is no comparison So lovely to behold Beyond the Pearly Gates But there is no comparison For the beauty that awaits 6 May 2018 For the contest sponsored by James Edward Lee, Sr.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/21/2018 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed. Well written.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/21/2018 4:54:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. Our Creator is a good subject for any form of poetry but I would never sponsor a contest asking for this form. It made placement, so I am satisfied that I did it properly.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/16/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Curtis,,Wonderful write and wisdom.. Hugs Eve ~' *

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/21/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. I am not exactly fond of this form but I made the effort to do it properly. It paid off with a win.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/16/2018 5:04:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Curtis.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/21/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Line. Pantoum is not my favorite form but it's what the sponsor wanted. I made an effort and it paid off.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/7/2018 1:09:00 PM

A brilliant pantoum Curtis , certainly not the easiest form to do. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/7/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thanks, Tom, but I'm not sure I got the form exactly right!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/6/2018 8:53:00 PM

Well done, Curtis.

Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/7/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you, Line. Did I get the form right? Pantoum is confusing!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 5/6/2018 7:02:00 PM

Curt another capital write from your very talented quill! I expect it to be at the top of the winners circle - Bob

Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/6/2018 7:45:00 PM

Bob, it's always good to hear from you. Were it not for you, I may not be a member of Soup at all. The definition of gratitude pales in comparison to your generosity. Your encouragement over the years has been a boon to my writing. I appreciate your support and value your friendship.