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Lord I Pantoum

Lord, I pantoum you now and forever, I yearn for that river of holy shrine, Advice of the wicked follow never. Rather adore and laud you, my divine. I yearn for that river of holy shrine Your ways are planted along flowing streams, Rather adore and laud you, my divine. Look your creation where everything gleams. Your ways are planted along flowing streams, So I know why I don't deserve this place. Look your creation where everything gleams. Thus I cry for your help, plead for your grace. So I know why I don't deserve this place Advice of the wicked follow never. Thus I cry for your help, plead for your grace. Lord, I pantoum you now and forever. 21 November 2020

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Date: 11/27/2020 7:07:00 PM
but why not for the contest? I know you are a free spirit but wow, this is the BEST pantoum I think I have seen this week!! It would get more exposure if on a winner list!!
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Date: 11/22/2020 11:15:00 AM
If any one deserves to go to heaven, you do Victor, you are a true soldier and follower of Christ, he sees you! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/22/2020 1:58:00 AM
Amazing Pantoum of praise, Victor:)
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Date: 11/21/2020 11:01:00 PM
beautiful pantoum, Victor.
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Date: 11/21/2020 9:50:00 PM
A splendidly beautiful verse, that's so inspirational. Reading it is truly joyful. It's a Fave. :)
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:20:00 PM
A glorious poem, Victor. You show a lot of faith in these words. Have a wonderful night :)
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:03:00 PM
- "Psalm 103: 10-12 He does not deal with us according to our sins, nor does he repay us for our iniquities. For as high as the heavens are above the earth, his mercy is mighty over those who fear him." - A lovely prayer, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2020 11:55:00 AM
Hi Victor . A testament of faith...Soupmail.
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Date: 11/21/2020 11:50:00 AM
Reads like a prayer Victor, I don't find this form easy but you've made it look so. Tom
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Date: 11/21/2020 8:51:00 AM
this is beautiful Victor, though we may feel unworthy at times, we are worthy in his eyes most often... hugs
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Date: 11/21/2020 5:24:00 AM
Words of faith and divinity shine in your poem, Victor. Enjoyed the message of your write--eloquently delivered.
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:29:00 AM
Lovely write, my friend. God bless you
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Date: 11/21/2020 3:13:00 AM
We really don't deserve the love and mercy He shows us, but we are his children, and he blesses us with His patience. Your thoughts are wonderfully written, Victor.
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Date: 11/21/2020 2:54:00 AM
May each stanza rejoice...there is a blessing at the end of the rainbow... I pantoum with you to our Lord...
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