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Looking Forward

Like a jaded rogue I would be remiss Lest I laud autumn's approaching bliss Her blithe effervescence Her brooding essence Her eternally young autumnal kiss 7/6/22 FIRST PLACE Written for: 'Bite Size Poem no48' Contest by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 2:49:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Robert ~

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/12/2022 7:22:00 PM

Yes, Autumn's kiss is such bliss ! ! There's something so magical about this season. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Robert, on your first place win. My best to you. :) Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2022 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Looking Forward" is a beautiful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away................

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/11/2022 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. You too have a blessed day! Robert

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/11/2022 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful poetry. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/11/2022 11:27:00 AM

I always have fallen for Autumn; it leaves me breathless. Thank you, Gina. God Bless

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2022 10:25:00 PM

A beautiful poem with nature's beauty very vividly said in short. Congratulations!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/11/2022 11:25:00 AM

Thank you, I usually strive for brevity over a long windedness. Robert

Valsa George

Date: 7/10/2022 2:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win dear Robert ! A very sensuous indulgence in autumn.....

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/10/2022 12:19:00 PM

Autumn has always been my dear melancholy companion. Thank you, Valsa. Robert

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/7/2022 10:31:00 AM

I find "Looking Forward" a romantic take on the Fall. In Southern California at temps. of 110, Fall is gently on my mind. Great for high place in Bite Size contest!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/10/2022 12:23:00 PM

Though summer is long and hot, September, look at the cool serenity nature's brought. Thank you, I Am Anaya! Robert

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/6/2022 3:43:00 PM

Very nice, Robert - I like it!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/10/2022 12:23:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed! Robert