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In my dreamy dream I am floating, defying gravity, like a buoyant cloud I drift up and around the moon; I sail and hover, suspended, just hanging, and then, I am wandering the surface of the moon; looking back at Earth, I shed a tear. Earth trembles and I can see it changing, I reach out and can hold it in my hands; and realize my hands and body have a moon glow, oh Earth, you are a precious treasure found; looking back at Earth, I am full of fear. This exquisite ball in my hands is so fragile, and it is being destroyed, it is falling to ruin; the devastation is catastrophic, brutal and vicious, war, famine, storms, death of humanity, creatures; looking back at Earth, I am so scared. Flooding somewhere, parched and thirsty somewhere else, uncontrollable fires, quakes and land slides, pollution; the fish are dying, birds dead, extinction everywhere, deadly virus diseases are spreading around the world; looking back at Earth, I am weeping, weeping. And although I rather like the moon glow, Earth is home, so, I must return and try to save it from destruction; I will join the battle against the end of our Earth, oh, the icebergs are melting and we cannot stop them; looking back at Earth, I shed a tear. _______________________________ February 26, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Looking Back at Earth Copyright Protected, ID 20-1230-572-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Picture Prompt sponsor, Brenda Chiri Third Place

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Date: 3/12/2020 11:47:00 PM
Constance, our poetry is our picket sign. Raising awareness, and joining forces with other like minds. Bless you for this painful, but honest write, and for sharing it with your community. Congrats for your win. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:35:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/11/2020 9:59:00 PM
Dear heart congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:35:00 PM
Brenda, thanks for the contest and my great placement, so honored _Constance
Date: 2/27/2020 1:10:00 AM
So Sad, well done Constance...
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:11:00 PM
Charlie thanks for the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/26/2020 7:34:00 PM
wow...so much wisdom and truth within your words... love how to crafted this one...as exquisite as the ball you hold are your thoughts! Brilliant write! Best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Date: 2/27/2020 7:12:00 PM
Sandra thanks for the great comment _Constance
Date: 2/26/2020 5:11:00 PM
Very nice read! Best wishes.
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Date: 2/26/2020 7:13:00 PM
Adullah, thanks so much for the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/26/2020 3:34:00 PM
Love your interpretation of the picture Constance. Why is it that the powers that be cannot see it, yet we can. Money, power and greed come to mind. Good luck Tom. Soupmail.
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Date: 2/26/2020 7:14:00 PM
Tom, thanks so much the visit and the compliment on my poem and the soupmail _Constance
Date: 2/26/2020 3:33:00 PM
Beautiful words expressed from the heart of a poet. Very imaginative, powerful and full of emotion. Your words define the heart of great poetry, painting pictures that are emotionally charged, and summon a tear.
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Date: 2/26/2020 7:15:00 PM
Emile, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment _Constance
Date: 2/26/2020 3:29:00 PM
All so true, so sad, so true... And yet, we've solved so many seemingly insoluble problems with human ingenuity and resourcefulness---when we've really applied ourselves. Who's to say we can't keep it going... and going? Here's to the Human Spirit! … And enjoy the view up there! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2020 7:16:00 PM
Gershon, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great comment _Constance

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