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We had a lot less material things when my mom and dad separated. I learned a lot about life and living in the swamp lands and my grandpa taaught me it's better to sit back and keep your mouth shut and watch what is going on around you at all times and to learn from the experience of others.  He always said it takes more brains to stay out of trouble than it does to get into it.                                                                                                                                         God Bless,                                                                                                                                             JB

Life ain't always easy, Can be a bitter pill, But I found when I was young, I could have fun still. We were poor I guess that's true, 'Cause Mama left my dad, And took me to the swamp lands, Where I found life not half bad. Folks out there didn't have much school, Got by on common sense. In fact they looked on city folks, As just a little dense. Mom wasn't understanding, And beat me now and then. I guess she figured that's the way, You keep a child from sin. Grandpa understood me more, And kept her oft at bay. The quiet man laid down the law, And folks heard what he'd say. Our food was what we grew out back, And what our men folk hunted. It wasn't fancy that's for sure, But no one grew up stunted. It taught me to be patient, And wait upon The Lord. It taught me not to live too far, Above what I afford. I learned to love The Lord a lot, Depend upon His Grace. I also learned an honest man, Need never hide his face. I guess I can't complain too much, 'Cause it made me what I am; And taught me to appreciate, And respect my fellow man.

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Date: 3/23/2021 10:05:00 AM
Hi Judy, You are a good story teller .Our upbringing, good or bad has a significant influence on our lives. Your grandpa sounds like a wise man. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/23/2021 10:13:00 AM
Thanks bunches Alexis. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/23/2021 9:34:00 AM
Ah, Judy, I enjoyed this one immensely, too. You have a gift for story-telling and you do it so well in verse. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thanks bunches Milton. God Bless, JB

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