Look at the light

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Heidi Sands.

Entry for Hidden Acrostic poetry contest. Sponsor: Crystol Woods

As the sun (L)ifts today Sending rays (A)cross the land Breathe deep (T)hrough the way Your path of (L)eisure will help you stand Seconds, minutes, are like gold Shining in your palm to hold Your arms like wings, your mind your guide Across any rough waters to the other side Every moment counts today Look at the light, comfort will stay 6/11/25

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/13/2025 4:43:00 AM

I feel lighter just reading your lines Heidi! I totally agree with your message and will keep it in mind this morning !! Good Luck in the contest and I hope you've been well! Happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2025 4:55:00 AM

Hi. MIke. I am so happy to hear that . Thank you. It has been a rough road. I am recovering from 2 back to back emergency surgeries. Recovery is slow, but I am making it. I appreciate your comment. I hope all is well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2025 1:40:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Heidi ... everything is better with a little sunshine :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2025 3:35:00 AM

Thank you very much . Hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2025 11:26:00 AM

Very nice write Heidi, glad to read you again, enjoy your day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2025 11:32:00 AM

Hi John . Nice to see you. Thank you. I hope all is well. :)