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Look at the light

You can try to make everything right Travel the road, looking every direction You can plan, work and predict You can try your hardest and live the fullest But, there is no control of what happens Anything can happen at any time Things can turn upside-down in a flip Even when all you do is right and with effort When the sun rises and things are ok, be grateful in the moment for this rising Step forward with trust and look at the light Heidi Sands 6/9/25 (C)opyright

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Date: 6/10/2025 12:00:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great Ending... Yes, be grateful... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2025 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 6/9/2025 12:15:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Yes step forward and look at the light. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/9/2025 2:35:00 PM
Hello Heidi you are very welcome. enjoy your evening. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2025 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much . I appreciate your comments and the Fave too :)
Date: 6/9/2025 9:22:00 AM
nice one.....reminds me of the leonard cohen song line....'there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in'.... ......len
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2025 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 6/9/2025 9:04:00 AM
Fate has a habit of ruining our best laid plans. Can't be helped. I can relate to this.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2025 9:39:00 AM
So true, I have learned. Thank you :)

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