Look At All That Poo

look at all that poo 
its splattered all over you 
didn't find the loo?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Eww, eww, eww Vie. I had no idea! LOL Congratulations on your win! :)
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 10:41 AM
yeauk and douuble yeuk Vienna lol,many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Miller Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Yuk; congratulations
DiMino Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Anyone who has children...anyone who is a senior senior, knows this rhyme well...and the embarrassing unbedazzling tell. Oh well, just a lot lot of smell.
Rose  Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 1:24 AM
Alot of pooing in ones life time lol, thanks for reading Joe, :)
Mitra Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 8:47 AM
So simple and catchy, a smile comes instantly
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Glad I made you smile dear poetess, thanks for the kind visit :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 1:11 AM
Craftily written. Hugs and blessings.
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Thanks Victor, its for the contest hope it rates well
Empress Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:07 AM
Omg haha so vivid! Love this ! No one sees the poo on them or smell their own poo but are quick to find poo on others! Brilliant one
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Everyone loves a good poo story, lol, hope its what the sponsor is looking for
Lane Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:44 PM
That is so disgusting... lol Perfect!
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:27 PM
yes it is Lin, contest rules must be stinky lol
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Lol. Yuk!
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:26 PM
its for the poo contest, hope its well received lol
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