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Squint and imagine My teacher once said to me For there may be more to see At first it seems clear But if then you look closely Another layer of truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/25/2013 2:44:00 PM
I really enjoyed this succinct one, Barbara. It didn't puzzle my puzzlers. heehee. BIG congrats in Deb's contest.
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Date: 3/23/2013 12:33:00 PM
BARBARA, congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda
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Date: 3/22/2013 7:04:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2013 12:47:00 PM
short, simple, sweet, and to the point... very well done
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:42:00 AM
Barb wisdom written in a Choka form. As an artisit that is how I was taught to see objects when drawing them. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:46:00 AM
This is an awesome write my dear friend BG. She is a very good teacher indeed! I enjoyed reading your write today. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by leaving me wonderful comments on my poem. Have a great day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:19:00 PM
yes, such truth here - clever write, Barbara. Congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
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Date: 3/11/2013 7:13:00 AM
Your teacher was wise - well said, Barbara! - Wish you a nice new week. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:22:00 PM
Wonderful advice this! Layers of truth hide from those who do not take time to decipher hidden meanings. Very well penned BG!
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