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foggy somber day looking out over the pier for maybe something someone semblance of echo deep inside to convince me somehow i am not alone AP: Honorable Mentoin 2022 Submitted on July 6, 2019 for contest FIVES AND SEVENS (#3) sponsored by JOSEPH MAY - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 7/22/2019 9:06:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/22/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thanks, Jeanne. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/22/2019 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations Line, enjoyed the simplicity and sentiment
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/22/2019 9:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Georgia.
Date: 7/22/2019 5:39:00 AM
- You are never alone, Line - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/22/2019 5:55:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sunshine.
Date: 7/21/2019 8:01:00 PM
Congrats!! for this awesome entry and win, Line...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, WW.
Date: 7/21/2019 4:19:00 PM
This has a haunting beauty to it Line. Melancholy transcends. Congratulations on your deserving podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/21/2019 2:43:00 PM
Haunting, powerful poem, Line. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, gw
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Date: 7/21/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.
Date: 7/21/2019 2:38:00 PM
Very nicely penned Line..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 7/21/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/21/2019 2:37:00 PM
Dramatically beautiful choka. Congrats on foggy somber silver, Line)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/8/2019 2:23:00 PM
Hello Lynn, yes i do see loneliness here.Yet longing for someone to come your way. have a nice day my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, Darling.
Date: 7/7/2019 10:56:00 PM
A tender moment. So well written.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren.
Date: 7/7/2019 1:22:00 PM
Yes, that indefinable voice deep inside us... Nicely done, Line! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/7/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/6/2019 2:16:00 PM
Great contemplation! Lonna
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks, Lonna, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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