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Long Shadows

Feeling frightened, hungry, and cold, you cruise the streets, your head hung low. 'Cause your body is bought and sold, you search faces for those you know. Cash casts long shadows on the street; in a city that preys on trust. And when innocence needs to eat; morality's sold for a crust. Depression seeks to entrap you; within the role of, let's pretend. Because those you trust are all new, you curse fate for lack of a friend. Dreams take an emotional toll; nightmares come, and you cannot run. And with hope tucked into your soul, you fight sleep till the night is done. Despite your fears and tears, you've won a reprieve, surviving the night. And waking to a rising sun; confidence grows within its light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/8/2018 10:04:00 AM
"And when innocence needs to eat morality's sold for a crust." What a sad truth powerfully exposed. A lot of empathy in this lovely poem, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 5/18/2015 1:47:00 PM
EMILE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 5/18/2015 8:56:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/19/2015 4:22:00 AM
A sad poem, but a beautiful show of determination. Great, challenging read. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:32:00 PM
A sad but truthful message you convey, Emile. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 1:41:00 PM
Very nice angle on the contest....really loved the content and message...congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Donna, I appreciate your warm words. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 12:56:00 PM
Sad one but the truth of it still exist today..Interesting way to go with the contest theme.. Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:07:00 AM
Sara, as always I'm in your debt, thanks. Emile.
Date: 2/16/2015 12:57:00 AM
A wonderful win, Emile. Nice seeing you all over the contest winning page. SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Skat, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/15/2015 10:28:00 AM
This is so true Emile - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments and your warm hugs. Emile.
Date: 1/7/2015 5:13:00 PM
This is so true...well done!
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile

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