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I knew, that if you knew that I was watching Your thoughts of me would never be the same The sexual approach as you hugs and caresses her silicone enchancers So tightly, You feast upon her, sweetness That moaning sound, the bulging purple blood; Surges in your veins You close your eyes, and you sigh “Oh my God” words, I never heard like that before You seem at ease with the whore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/8/2013 5:50:00 PM
damn guy. haha
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:49:00 PM
wow, this is GOOD. I really LIKES it!!
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:48:00 PM
Very well written and all that comes to mind is what they don't know doesn't hurt them right.....maybe?????they should have closed the blinds!!!
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Annie Lander
Date: 2/8/2013 7:40:00 AM
Thank you DonnaJones..
Date: 2/7/2013 2:40:00 PM
A little dirty and very moving. Poetry as a form of art should move people, this is successful on many levels. A little shocker at the end is the icing on the cake. Well done.
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Annie Lander
Date: 2/7/2013 3:15:00 PM
I should have mention.. a little Extreme Adult only
Date: 2/7/2013 2:24:00 PM
omg this is really good and so intense...do I sense some anger? lol ! very good..luv,Deb
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Annie Lander
Date: 2/7/2013 2:39:00 PM
No angry, just having fun with my wild imagination
Date: 2/7/2013 2:09:00 PM
this is matured and mind thrilling love the expression and the emotion it is always personal
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Annie Lander
Date: 2/7/2013 2:15:00 PM
thank you so much for the feedback on this piece....I tried my best not to make it seem.. dirty with my words... blessed