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I knew, that if you knew that I was watching
Your thoughts of me would never be the same
The sexual approach as you hugs and 
caresses her silicone enchancers
         So tightly,
You feast upon her, sweetness 
That moaning sound, the bulging purple blood;
       Surges in your veins 

You close your eyes, and you sigh “Oh my God”
words, I never heard like that before
You seem at ease with the whore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:50 PM
damn guy. haha
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:49 PM
wow, this is GOOD. I really LIKES it!!
Jones Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Very well written and all that comes to mind is what they don't know doesn't hurt them right.....maybe?????they should have closed the blinds!!!
Lander Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Thank you DonnaJones..
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:40 PM
A little dirty and very moving. Poetry as a form of art should move people, this is successful on many levels. A little shocker at the end is the icing on the cake. Well done.
Lander Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 3:15 PM
I should have mention.. a little Extreme Adult only
Wilson Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:24 PM
omg this is really good and so intense...do I sense some anger? lol ! very good..luv,Deb
Lander Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:39 PM
No angry, just having fun with my wild imagination
Emmanuel Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:09 PM
this is matured and mind thrilling love the expression and the emotion it is always personal
Lander Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:15 PM
thank you so much for the feedback on this piece....I tried my best not to make it seem.. dirty with my words... blessed
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